Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用完整句子并避免断句，表达应更连贯自然。例如，可以直接说明喜欢唱歌的原因，并用连词连接句子。

예시: Yes, I really like singing because it helps me relax and feel happy. Also, I enjoy listening to music, which inspires me to sing loudly sometimes.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不准确，建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，避免断句，内容应更具体且连贯。

예시: Actually, I have never learned to sing formally or professionally. However, when I was in primary school, I took a music class where the teacher taught me some basic singing skills.

제안: 回答表达混乱且有语法错误，建议明确回答问题，使用完整句子，并用连词使表达更流畅。

예시: It's hard to say exactly who I want to sing for because I usually sing alone to relax. But if I have to choose, I would sing for my friends because it feels comfortable.

제안: 回答中断句过多，影响流畅性，建议使用连贯的句子表达观点，并提供具体理由。

예시: Yes, I definitely think singing can bring happiness to people because a happy song creates a joyful atmosphere and helps everyone relax.

× Yes, I really like to see.

✓ Yes, I really like singing.

动词like后面接动名词形式表示喜欢做某事，不能用不定式to see。这里应使用动名词singing。

× Because. Sing a song loudly makes me. Relax and have a happy mind.

✓ Singing a song loudly makes me relax and feel happy.

句子结构混乱，because后面没有完整句子，且多个句子断裂。应合并为完整句子表达原因。

× Actually I have not. Learn to how to sing formally and professional.

✓ Actually, I have not learned how to sing formally and professionally.

时态错误，have not后应接过去分词learned，且professional应为副词professionally修饰动词。

× When I was in primary school, I have taken a music class.

✓ When I was in primary school, I took a music class.

时间状语为过去时，主句应使用一般过去时took，而非现在完成时have taken。

× And the teacher told me the basic thing skills.

✓ And the teacher taught me the basic skills.

表达不准确，thing skills不合适，应直接用skills，且told改为taught更符合教学语境。

× It's hard to say exact Persian who I want to sing for because I think.

✓ It's hard to say exactly who I want to sing for because I think.

exact应为副词exactly修饰动词say，Persian无意义，应去掉。

× I always think is so alone just for relax but if I must too.

✓ I always think singing alone is relaxing, but if I must choose someone,

句子结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，表达不完整，应补充完整句子。

× Choose a person I would. Sing a song for my friends, it's confortable.

✓ I would choose a person to sing a song for my friends; it's comfortable.

句子断裂，choose前缺主语I，confortable拼写错误，应为comfortable。

× I definitely. Think. A happy song can make. A joyful atmosphere for people and it can make everyone relax.

✓ I definitely think a happy song can create a joyful atmosphere for people and help everyone relax.

句子断裂，definitely后不应断句，make a joyful atmosphere表达不自然，改为create更合适。