Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在多处语法错误和拼写错误，如"saying"应为"singing"，"becauses"应为"because"，"interesting"应为"interested"。建议你在回答时注意单词拼写和语法的正确性，同时回答应更自然流畅，避免重复。

예시: Personally, I don't like singing because I'm not very good at it. However, I enjoy listening to music a lot.

제안: 回答中语法混乱，句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议你使用完整的句子，明确表达时间和原因，并注意单词拼写，如"why was young"应为"when I was young"，"saying songs"应为"singing songs"。

예시: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was young because my parents taught me. However, my performance was not very good, so we eventually gave up.

제안: 回答表达不够自然，存在语法错误和用词不当，如"will like"应为"would like"，"saying"应为"singing"。建议你使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子结构，使意思更清晰。

예시: I would like to sing for my parents because I feel less shy around them, and it helps me perform better than when I sing for other people.

제안: 回答中有严重的语法和拼写错误，句子结构混乱，难以理解。建议你练习基本句型，注意主谓一致和正确使用时态，同时避免拼写错误，如"thing sounds"应为"sing songs"，"sins"应为"songs"。

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness. I often sing songs to my friends when they feel stressed. Even though I'm not a good singer, my friends say my songs make them feel happy.

× Personally, I don't like saying becauses I'm not good at saying.

✓ Personally, I don't like singing because I'm not good at singing.

这里'saying'用错了，应该用'singing'表示唱歌。动词后接-ing形式表示喜欢或不喜欢做某事。

× However. I am interesting in listening music.

✓ However, I am interested in listening to music.

'interesting'是形容词，表示令人感兴趣，应该用' interested'表示自己感兴趣；'listening'后面需要介词'to'，表示听某物。

× Yes, why was young?

✓ Yes, when I was young?

'why'用错了，应该是'when'表示时间；'was'前面缺少主语'I'。

× My parents that mean learned how to sing, but my performance was not so well, so we all gave up for saying songs.

✓ My parents, that means, learned how to sing, but my performance was not so good, so we all gave up singing songs.

'that mean'应为'that means'；'well'用作副词，形容词应为'good'；'gave up for saying songs'错误，'gave up singing songs'正确。

× I will like to sing for my parents.

✓ I would like to sing for my parents.

表达愿望时用'would like'更合适，'will like'不正确。

× The main reason is I will not feel so shy to see my parents and this can lead me seem better than saying to the other people.

✓ The main reason is I will not feel so shy to sing for my parents and this can make me seem better than singing to other people.

'see my parents'应为'sing for my parents'；'lead me seem'应为'make me seem'；'saying'应为'singing'；'to the other people'应为'other people'。

× Yes, I think so because I often thing sounds to my friends when she feels so stressful.

✓ Yes, I think so because I often sing songs to my friends when they feel stressed.

'thing sounds'应为'sing songs'；'she'应为'they'与'friends'一致；'stressful'形容事物，形容人应为'stressed'。

× Although I'm not good as seeing but she often told me that my sins is so funny and let him feel so happy NIS.

✓ Although I'm not good at singing, she often tells me that my songs are so funny and make her feel very happy.

'not good as seeing'应为'not good at singing'；'sins'应为'songs'；'is'应为'are'与复数'songs'一致；'let him feel'应为'make her feel'，代词与前文一致；'NIS'无意义，应删除。