Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề để trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lặp từ. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói rõ lý do tại sao bạn thích hát và cảm xúc khi hát.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. I love listening to my favorite singers and sometimes I try to sing along with them.

제안: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể về việc học hát, tránh câu bị ngắt quãng và không rõ nghĩa.

예시: Yes, I have taken singing classes since I was a child. My mother enrolled me in these classes where I learned how to sing properly and perform songs confidently.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần hoàn chỉnh và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu đầy đủ và tránh ngắt quãng. Bạn nên giải thích rõ hơn lý do tại sao bạn muốn hát cho mẹ và cảm xúc của bạn khi làm điều đó.

예시: I want to sing for my mother because she is the most important person in my life. Singing for her is my way of showing love and appreciation for everything she has done for me.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh để diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn. Hãy giải thích cụ thể hơn về cách hát hoặc âm nhạc mang lại niềm vui và cảm xúc tích cực cho mọi người.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because music allows people to feel the emotions expressed by the singer, which helps them relax and feel joyful.

× I like singing. Yes, of course, I very like singing because I think is make me happy when I listen it in.

✓ I like singing. Yes, of course, I really like singing because I think it makes me happy when I listen to it.

The sentence has errors in present tense usage and verb forms. 'I very like' is incorrect; it should be 'I really like' to express degree. 'I think is make me happy' is incorrect; it should be 'I think it makes me happy' because 'it' is the subject and 'makes' agrees with singular subject in present tense. Also, 'listen it in' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'listen to it'.

× The one of the reason because I'm very like, listen the singer singing their song.

✓ One of the reasons is that I really like listening to singers singing their songs.

'The one of the reason' is incorrect; it should be 'One of the reasons' because 'reason' is countable and plural form is needed. 'I'm very like' is incorrect; it should be 'I really like'. Also, 'listen the singer singing their song' is incorrect; it should be 'listening to singers singing their songs' to use the gerund form and correct preposition.

× And I want to sing with them.

✓ And I want to sing with them.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× Yes, when I was a tried my mom take me to the singing classes and there they taught me how to sing well and they taught me how to perform the songs like or singer Anne I'm.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, my mom took me to singing classes and there they taught me how to sing well and how to perform songs like singer Anne I'm.

'I was a tried' is incorrect; it should be 'I was a child' or 'I was young'. 'My mom take me' should be 'my mom took me' to use past tense. 'The singing classes' can be 'singing classes' without 'the'. 'Like or singer Anne I'm' is unclear; corrected to 'like singer Anne I'm'.

× Very relaxed on the.

✓ I felt very relaxed there.

'Very relaxed on the' is incomplete and incorrect. It should be 'I felt very relaxed there' to express the feeling and location properly.

× The people I want to sing for is my mom, who is the greatest woman in my life because she.

✓ The person I want to sing for is my mom, who is the greatest woman in my life because she.

'The people' is plural but refers to one person 'my mom'; it should be 'The person'.

× Do everything. Well, for me, so I want to sing for her as a present.

✓ She does everything well for me, so I want to sing for her as a present.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks a subject and verb. It should be combined into a complete sentence with subject 'She' and verb 'does'.

× I showed my love for her in my.

✓ I want to show my love for her through my singing.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. It should be completed to express the intended meaning.

× Yes, of course. In my opinion, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when they listen to the music they can fill the.

✓ Yes, of course. In my opinion, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when they listen to music, they can feel the

'Listen to the music' is acceptable but 'listen to music' is more natural. 'They can fill the' is incorrect; it should be 'they can feel the'.

× Impression impression the singer show to them and they feel relaxed and happy.

✓ impression the singer shows to them and they feel relaxed and happy.

The phrase 'Impression impression' is a repetition error. Also, 'show' should be 'shows' to agree with singular subject 'singer'.