Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Try to avoid grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect your ideas logically. Also, keep your answer concise and relevant to the question.

예시: Yes, I have liked singing since I was a child because it helps me relax and express my emotions. I especially enjoy listening to Hollywood English songs, and I often sing along to improve my pronunciation and fluency.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence. Use simple and correct sentences to explain your experience with learning singing. Avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases.

예시: No, I have never formally learned how to sing. I usually listen to songs and try to imitate the singers to improve my skills.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words for coherence. Also, avoid unclear phrases like 'There sentence of a bond'. Try to be more specific about why singing for them is special.

예시: I would like to sing for my family and close friends because they are very supportive and appreciate my efforts. Singing for them motivates me to perform better, and it creates a warm and joyful atmosphere that strengthens our bond.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand due to grammar and vocabulary errors. Try to clearly express your opinion with simple sentences. Use linking words like 'because' to explain your reasons logically.

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when they feel depressed or anxious, listening to songs can give them a peaceful feeling and motivate them to work harder.

× To be honest, I have like singing since I was a child because it helps me relax then express my emotions.

✓ To be honest, I have liked singing since I was a child because it helps me relax and express my emotions.

The verb 'have like' is incorrect; the present perfect tense requires the past participle form 'liked'. Also, 'then' should be 'and' to connect two actions properly.

× I especially enjoy listening to Hollywood English songs, then often try to sing along to improve my pronunciation and fluency.

✓ I especially enjoy listening to Hollywood English songs and often try to sing along to improve my pronunciation and fluency.

The conjunction 'then' is incorrectly used to connect two simultaneous actions; 'and' is appropriate here.

× Singing is a great faith from enjoying me and I always improve my English by sea.

✓ Singing is a great source of enjoyment for me, and I always improve my English by singing.

The sentence is unclear and contains incorrect phrases like 'great faith from enjoying me' and 'by sea'. It should be restructured for clarity and correct word usage.

× In my perception since from childhood I never learned how to think, I just listening to them and feeling a wife of them.

✓ In my perception, since childhood I have never learned how to sing; I just listen to them and feel a part of them.

The verb 'learned' is correct but the phrase 'how to think' is incorrect; it should be 'how to sing'. 'Just listening' should be 'just listen' to match present tense. 'Feeling a wife of them' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended 'feel a part of them'.

× But the some possible thing that how to learn thing is that we should pronounce an A song with this line send.

✓ But the possible way to learn is that we should pronounce a song with the correct intonation.

The sentence is grammatically incorrect and unclear. It needs restructuring and correction of phrases like 'an A song with this line send' to convey the intended meaning.

× I would like to sing for my family and close friends. Singing from them feel special because they are supportive and appreciate my efforts, which motivates me to perform better.

✓ I would like to sing for my family and close friends. Singing for them feels special because they are supportive and appreciate my efforts, which motivates me to perform better.

The phrase 'Singing from them' is incorrect; it should be 'Singing for them'. Also, 'feel' should be 'feels' to agree with the singular subject 'Singing'.

× Additionally, sharing music with the love ones creates a warm and joyful atmosphere. There sentence of a bond.

✓ Additionally, sharing music with loved ones creates a warm and joyful atmosphere. It strengthens the bond.

'Love ones' should be 'loved ones'. 'There sentence of a bond' is incorrect and unclear; it should be replaced with a proper sentence like 'It strengthens the bond'.

× To be honest, I think that thinking can bring happiness to people becauses when whenever people and depression anixety they will listen to a song according to the revive which gives them a peaceful vibe and appreciated them to do work and dedicated in there.

✓ To be honest, I think that singing can bring happiness to people because when people have depression and anxiety, they listen to songs that revive them, which gives them a peaceful vibe and motivates them to work and be dedicated.

The sentence contains multiple errors: 'thinking' should be 'singing'; 'becauses' is misspelled; 'people and depression anixety' is incorrect and should be 'people have depression and anxiety'; 'according to the revive' is unclear and replaced with 'that revive them'; 'appreciated them to do work and dedicated in there' is incorrect and replaced with 'motivates them to work and be dedicated'.