Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question and providing a clear reason. Avoid redundancy and incorrect phrases like 'you and I get compliments'.

예시: Yes, I like singing because I have a melodious voice, and my friends often compliment me when I sing.

제안: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Use correct sentence structures and clarify your meaning. For example, instead of 'training me online', say 'practicing singing online'. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating the same idea.

예시: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I have practiced singing at home using online tutorials.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Try to express your ideas clearly and logically. For example, explain why you want to sing for your family and what they mean to you, using complete sentences and proper linking words.

예시: I want to sing for my family because they work very hard and have supported me through the ups and downs of life. Singing for them is my way of showing gratitude.

제안: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect them. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'random songs'.

예시: Yes, singing can bring happiness to people because it is a way to express love. Moreover, listening to songs can help improve people's mood and make them feel better.

× Yes, I love singing as I have a melodious voice and you and I get compliments from my friends whenever I sing any song.

✓ Yes, I love singing as I have a melodious voice and I get compliments from my friends whenever I sing any song.

The phrase 'you and I get compliments' is incorrect because the speaker is referring only to themselves receiving compliments. Using 'you and I' implies both the listener and speaker get compliments, which is not intended here. The correct pronoun is 'I' alone.

× No, I have never learned to how to sing as I have a good melodious voice and even I have practiced it at home while training me online.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing as I have a good melodious voice and I have even practiced it at home while training myself online.

The phrase 'learned to how to sing' is incorrect; the correct form is 'learned how to sing' without 'to'. Also, 'training me online' is incorrect; it should be 'training myself online' to correctly use the reflexive pronoun.

× No, I have never learned to how to sing as I have a good melodious voice and even I have practiced it at home while training me online.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing as I have a good melodious voice and I have even practiced it at home while training myself online.

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' should be used instead of 'me' when the subject and object refer to the same person. 'Training me' is incorrect; it should be 'training myself'.

× I want to sing for my family as my family is very hard working and they are. Satisfying with older Ups