Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant but a bit short and could be more natural by adding linking words and more specific details. Try to expand your answer with reasons and examples to make it more effective.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax after a long day, and I enjoy seeing how it can lift the mood of people around me.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains errors that affect understanding. Try to respond directly and clearly, avoid unrelated phrases, and use correct vocabulary. Also, keep your answer concise and coherent.

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons, but I enjoy listening to different songs and trying to imitate the singers to improve my skills.

제안: Your answer has some unclear words and incomplete sentences. Make sure to use correct words and complete your thoughts. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: I want to sing for my wife, my daughter, and other family members who enjoy music. I also like to sing for myself because it makes me happy.

제안: Your answer is too short and contains unrelated or unclear ideas. Focus on answering the question directly with clear reasons and examples. Avoid unrelated statements and use linking words to connect your ideas.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them express their feelings and creates a joyful atmosphere during social gatherings.

× No, I just listen to other people saying and try to imitate while.

✓ No, I just listen to other people singing and try to imitate them.

The word 'saying' is incorrect here because the action being referred to is singing, not saying. Also, 'while' is misplaced and unclear. The correct verb form is 'singing' (present participle) to describe the ongoing action. Additionally, 'imitate' should be followed by an object, so 'them' is added for clarity.

× How many charter change?

✓ How many character changes are there?

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It lacks a proper verb and subject agreement. The corrected sentence includes the verb 'are' and clarifies the meaning by using 'character changes' instead of 'charter change'.

× And listening to different songs.

✓ I also listen to different songs.

This is a sentence fragment lacking a subject and verb. To correct it, a subject 'I' and verb 'listen' are added to form a complete sentence.

× Unsync for my wife, for my daughter, for my family members who enjoy listening to songs and.

✓ I sing for my wife, my daughter, and my family members who enjoy listening to songs.

The word 'Unsync' is incorrect and unclear. The sentence is also incomplete and ends abruptly with 'and'. The correction replaces 'Unsync' with 'I sing' and completes the list properly without an unnecessary conjunction at the end.

× Also to myself.

✓ I also sing to myself.

This is a sentence fragment missing a subject and verb. Adding 'I also sing' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Solve wars.

✓ It can help solve wars.

The original is a fragment without a subject or verb. Adding 'It can help' forms a complete sentence and clarifies the intended meaning.

× And conflicts and make other people happy.

✓ It can help solve conflicts and make other people happy.

This is a fragment starting with 'And' and missing a subject. Adding 'It can help' at the beginning completes the sentence and connects it properly to the previous idea.