Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer shows enthusiasm but contains several grammatical errors and unclear phrases which affect clarity. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. Although I'm not a professional singer, I like to sing for fun, especially when I'm with my friends or family. Singing allows me to share positive feelings with others and lift their spirits.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes and confusing phrases. Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details using correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid unnecessary repetition and ensure coherence with linking words.

예시: Yes, I learnt how to sing when I was in primary and secondary school. Music was an optional subject, and I took it to improve my singing skills. This experience helped me understand basic music theory and practice singing regularly.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar errors. Try to organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Use specific vocabulary to express feelings and relationships clearly.

예시: I want to sing for my beloved family and close friends because they have always supported me. Singing for them is a way to express my feelings and show my gratitude. I believe music can bring us closer and create special moments together.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific examples to support your opinion.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions freely. For example, when people sing together, it creates a joyful atmosphere and helps them feel more connected. Additionally, singing can reduce stress and improve well-being, which contributes to overall happiness.

× Yes, I love singing because it helps me relax and expressed my emotions or your.

✓ Yes, I love singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions.

The verb 'expressed' is incorrectly used in the past participle form here. After 'helps me relax and', the verb should be in the base form 'express' to maintain parallel structure and correct tense.

× Yes, I love singing because it helps me relax and expressed my emotions or your.

✓ Yes, I love singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions.

The phrase 'or your' is incorrect and unclear in this context. It should be removed to maintain clarity and correct pronoun use.

× I enjoy singing for fun, for invading my loves others, especially when I'm with my friends or my family members.

✓ I enjoy singing for fun, for involving my loved ones, especially when I'm with my friends or my family members.

The phrase 'invading my loves others' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'involving my loved ones' to express including people you care about.

× I just wanna bring the positive in your.

✓ I just want to bring positivity to you.

The phrase 'bring the positive in your' is incorrect. 'Positivity' is the correct noun form, and 'to you' is the correct prepositional phrase to express the intended meaning.

× Yes, in the past when I was a student in primary school or secondary score on I get I got it done to study music.

✓ Yes, in the past when I was a student in primary school or secondary school, I got the chance to study music.

The original sentence has unclear and incorrect phrases like 'secondary score on I get I got it done'. It should be corrected to 'secondary school, I got the chance' to properly express past tense and meaning.

× You know that is a come and optional subset in my score an music gave me the time to learn.

✓ You know that it is a common and optional subject in my school, and music gave me the time to learn.

The phrase 'come and optional subset in my score an music' is incorrect. It should be 'common and optional subject in my school' to correctly use prepositions and vocabulary.

× I want the things for my beloved ones suggest by family and close friends because I have always because they all they have always supported me.

✓ I want to sing for my beloved ones, such as family and close friends, because they have always supported me.

The original sentence is confusing and contains incorrect pronouns and phrases like 'suggest by family'. It should be corrected for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× Singing for them is a way to express my feeling and so my gratitude to them.

✓ Singing for them is a way to express my feelings and show my gratitude to them.

The phrase 'express my feeling and so my gratitude' is incorrect. It should be 'express my feelings and show my gratitude' for correct noun plural and verb use.

× I believe that music can bring us closer and create so back so moments specials.

✓ I believe that music can bring us closer and create special moments together.

The phrase 'so back so moments specials' is incorrect. It should be 'special moments together' to use correct adjectives and adverbs.

× Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to others people because it allows them to express your emotions freely.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to other people because it allows them to express their emotions freely.

The phrase 'others people' is incorrect; it should be 'other people'. Also, 'your emotions' should be 'their emotions' to match the subject 'them'.

× For example when people sing together is creates of joyful as morphea and help them feel more connected.

✓ For example, when people sing together, it creates joy and helps them feel more connected.

The phrase 'is creates of joyful as morphea' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'it creates joy' for correct verb form and noun use.

× Or recently singing can reduce stress and improve our well-being which contributes to happiness.

✓ Recently, singing can reduce stress and improve our well-being, which contributes to happiness.

Starting a sentence with 'Or' is incorrect here. It should be removed or replaced with 'Recently,' to correctly connect the idea.