Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，句子结构不完整，且存在语法错误。建议回答时使用完整句子，避免断句，表达更自然流畅。可以增加具体细节说明喜欢唱歌的原因。

예시: Yes, I like singing very much because it helps me relax and express my emotions. When I was a child, I often listened to my mother's beautiful singing, which inspired me to enjoy music.

제안: 回答中存在不连贯和无意义的词语，表达不清晰。建议使用简洁明了的句子，避免无关词汇，清楚说明原因并适当扩展。

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons because it is not one of my main hobbies. However, I enjoy listening to music in my free time, which helps me appreciate different singing styles.

제안: 回答表达基本清楚，但存在时态错误和拼写错误（ceiling应为 singing）。建议注意时态一致，拼写准确，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I want to sing for everyone because I enjoy sharing my feelings through music. It makes me happy when people listen and appreciate my singing. Also, I am currently learning songs by my favorite singer.

제안: 回答中有多处拼写和语法错误，句子不完整且难以理解。建议使用简单句表达观点，注意拼写和语法，增加具体例子说明。

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when I feel sad, I listen to music to encourage myself. Music always makes me feel better and happier.

× When I was child, I always listen to.

✓ When I was a child, I always listened to.

这里的时间状语是过去时（When I was a child），动词也应该用过去时态，因此将listen改为listened。

× Her. Voices is so stunning, beautiful.

✓ Her voice is so stunning and beautiful.

这里的'Her. Voices'不符合英语表达，应为单数名词'voice'，且句子结构需要连贯，使用and连接形容词。

× I don't have a connect voyage. Send it.

✓ I don't have a connection to singing.

原句中'connect voyage. Send it.'不符合语法和表达习惯，应改为'I don't have a connection to singing'，表达没有与唱歌相关的联系。

× I haven't spent much time practicing.

✓ I haven't spent much time practicing.

该句语法正确，无需修改。

× I wanted to sing for everyone because I enjoy sharing my feelings through music.

✓ I want to sing for everyone because I enjoy sharing my feelings through music.

问题句中'wanted'是过去时，但根据上下文，表达的是现在的愿望，应使用一般现在时'want'。

× It makes me happy when people listen and appreciate my ceiling.

✓ It makes me happy when people listen and appreciate my singing.

'ceiling'是错误单词，应为'singing'，表示唱歌。

× Yes, I think sending Cambrie happiness to people when I site.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people when I sing.

'sending Cambrie'和'site'均为拼写错误，应为'singing can bring'和'sing'。

× When I feel sad, I often listen to music to encouraged me.

✓ When I feel sad, I often listen to music to encourage me.

'encouraged'是过去式，句中应使用动词原形'encourage'，因为前面有不定式'to'。

× A music makes me happy and the game me.

✓ Music makes me happy and gives me energy.

'A music'错误，music是不可数名词，不加冠词；'the game me'无意义，应改为'gives me energy'或类似表达。