Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat natural but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to form complete sentences and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'I would still saying. Because it helps me,' say 'I still enjoy singing because it helps me relax.'

예시: I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and feel happy. Even though I am not a professional singer, I find it very soothing and enjoyable.

제안: Your answer has several incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. Make sure to complete your sentences and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, use the correct verb forms, for example, 'studied singing' instead of 'studied saying.'

예시: I studied singing when I was younger, but I stopped when I started working professionally. However, I would love to practice again to improve my skills.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant content like 'Are you OK?'. Avoid adding unrelated questions. Also, try to answer directly and clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy.

예시: I don't have a specific person to sing for. I sing mainly because I enjoy it and it helps improve my mood and happiness.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more natural. For example, say 'singing helps improve people's happiness' instead of 'helps improve happiness of people from me.' Use linking words to connect your example smoothly.

예시: Oh definitely, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, whenever I feel sad or lonely, I sing my heart out, and it helps lighten my mood.

× Even though I do not know how to sing, I would still saying.

✓ Even though I do not know how to sing, I would still sing.

The verb 'say' is incorrectly used in its '-ing' form 'saying' here. After 'would still', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'sing' is correct. Using the '-ing' form is incorrect in this modal verb structure.

× I actually studied saying when I was younger, but I didn't continue it.

✓ I actually studied singing when I was younger, but I didn't continue it.

The word 'saying' is incorrect here; the correct gerund form related to the activity is 'singing'. 'Saying' means speaking words, while 'singing' refers to producing musical sounds with the voice.

× I stopped studying when I started working professionally, although I would love to go back into. Practicing. To improve more.

✓ I stopped studying when I started working professionally, although I would love to go back to practicing to improve more.

The original sentence is fragmented and incomplete. 'Go back into. Practicing. To improve more.' are sentence fragments. They should be combined into a complete sentence for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I would sing because I love to, but not that I would be seeing it for someone.

✓ I would sing because I love to, but not that I would be singing it for someone.

The word 'seeing' is incorrect here; the intended verb is 'singing'. Also, 'would be singing' is the correct continuous form to express the action in this context.

× Oh definitely, singing helps improve happiness of people from me.

✓ Oh definitely, singing helps improve the happiness of people for me.

The phrase 'from me' is incorrect in this context. The correct preposition is 'for me' to express that singing improves happiness for the speaker. Also, 'the happiness' is more appropriate here.