Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly in the first sentence and avoid repetition such as “if,” “about,” and “it.” Use a clear contrast with “However” or “whereas,” and give a specific reason or example. Also, say “math and numbers” and “I’m good at memorising them” rather than “that history or some story.”

예시: I’m not very good at memorising mathematical formulas or numbers because they are easy to mix up. However, I’m much better at remembering historical events and stories because they are connected to interesting details. For example, I can remember the main events of a historical documentary quite easily.

제안: State the incident clearly and use the correct tense: “I once forgot to attend a job interview.” Avoid fillers and repeated words such as “I just miss.” Explain the consequence precisely, for example, that you lost an employment opportunity. The answer should be natural and logically organised in two or three sentences.

예시: Yes, I once forgot to attend a job interview last year. I had written down the wrong date in my calendar, so I completely missed the appointment. As a result, I lost a good opportunity, and since then I have always set reminders for important events.

제안: Focus on one clear idea, such as remembering unfinished tasks. Use accurate time expressions: “yesterday,” “today,” and “tomorrow,” and avoid the unfinished sentence at the end. Explain how this helps you manage your responsibilities, using a linking word such as “therefore” or “so.”

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember any tasks that I have not finished. For example, I may need to complete a report or reply to an important email the next day. Therefore, I usually check my unfinished tasks before I go to bed and add them to my plan for the following day.

제안: Describe your methods in a clear sequence and use natural phrases such as “take notes,” “leave them beside my laptop,” and “prioritise my to-do list.” Avoid repeating “notes” and “something,” and finish the final idea. Include the purpose of each method, such as remembering unfinished work and meeting deadlines.

예시: I usually write important tasks in a notebook and leave it beside my laptop. That way, I see the notes as soon as I start working the next morning. I also prioritise my to-do list, so I can complete the most urgent tasks first and avoid missing deadlines.

× Not really if If it's about that math about number, I will feel it's difficult to memorize but if it but it about that history or some story, and I will be good at it.

✓ Not really. If it is about math or numbers, I find it difficult to memorize them, but if it is about history or a story, I am good at it.

Number should be plural because the student is speaking about numbers in general. The pronoun them correctly refers to the plural noun numbers.

× Not really if If it's about that math about number, I will feel it's difficult to memorize but if it but it about that history or some story, and I will be good at it.

✓ Not really. If it is about math or numbers, I find it difficult to memorize them, but if it is about history or a story, I am good at it.

The question asks about a general ability, so the present tense is more appropriate. Use I find and I am instead of future forms such as I will feel and I will be.

× Not really if If it's about that math about number, I will feel it's difficult to memorize but if it but it about that history or some story, and I will be good at it.

✓ Not really. If it is about math or numbers, I find it difficult to memorize them, but if it is about history or a story, I am good at it.

Do not use that before general uncountable nouns such as math or general plural nouns such as numbers. Use a story because story is a singular countable noun.

× Not really if If it's about that math about number, I will feel it's difficult to memorize but if it but it about that history or some story, and I will be good at it.

✓ Not really. If it is about math or numbers, I find it difficult to memorize them, but if it is about history or a story, I am good at it.

The original answer contains repeated words and incomplete clauses. Use one clear if-clause followed by a complete main clause, and connect the contrasting ideas with but.

× And definitely I still remember that I forgot to go to a job interview last year and it's really impressive because I just miss I just miss the miss the kind. so I just lose a chance.

✓ Definitely. I still remember that I forgot to go to a job interview last year. It was really unfortunate because I missed it, so I lost a chance.

The events happened last year, so the past tense is required: missed and lost. The past form of miss is missed, and the past form of lose is lost.

× And definitely I still remember that I forgot to go to a job interview last year and it's really impressive because I just miss I just miss the miss the kind. so I just lose a chance.

✓ Definitely. I still remember that I forgot to go to a job interview last year. It was really unfortunate because I missed it, so I lost a chance.

The original answer contains repetition, an incomplete phrase, and an incorrectly connected sentence. Separate the ideas into complete sentences and use because or so in a logically complete structure.

× In my daily life I need to remember that last day was things I haven't finished so I need to finish in today. So usually when I finish today I will this was something I haven't finished so then tomorrow I can

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember the things I did not finish the previous day so that I can finish them today. Usually, when I finish for the day, I review the things I have not finished so that I can finish them tomorrow.

Use did not finish for an action that was completed or not completed on the previous day. The phrase I will this was is not a valid verb structure and should be replaced with a complete clause.

× In my daily life I need to remember that last day was things I haven't finished so I need to finish in today. So usually when I finish today I will this was something I haven't finished so then tomorrow I can

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember the things I did not finish the previous day so that I can finish them today. Usually, when I finish for the day, I review the things I have not finished so that I can finish them tomorrow.

Do not use in before today. Say finish them today. The phrase the previous day is also a clearer and more natural time expression than last day in this context.

× In my daily life I need to remember that last day was things I haven't finished so I need to finish in today. So usually when I finish today I will this was something I haven't finished so then tomorrow I can

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember the things I did not finish the previous day so that I can finish them today. Usually, when I finish for the day, I review the things I have not finished so that I can finish them tomorrow.

The pronoun them refers to the things that were not finished. A clear object pronoun is needed after finish because finish requires an object in this sentence.

× In my daily life I need to remember that last day was things I haven't finished so I need to finish in today. So usually when I finish today I will this was something I haven't finished so then tomorrow I can

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember the things I did not finish the previous day so that I can finish them today. Usually, when I finish for the day, I review the things I have not finished so that I can finish them tomorrow.

The original answer contains incomplete clauses and unclear connections between ideas. Organize it into complete sentences with a subject, verb, and object, and use so that to show purpose.

× I will So take the notes and put the notes in front of my laptop so that next day when I open my laps I can know that something something I haven't finished and the other ways is I will prioritize my to do this so that I can finish the more.

✓ I take notes and put them in front of my laptop so that the next day, when I open my laptop, I can see what I have not finished. Another way is to prioritize my to-do list so that I can finish more.

The question asks about a regular method, so use the present tense I take and I prioritize. The present tense is normally used to describe routines and repeated actions.

× I will So take the notes and put the notes in front of my laptop so that next day when I open my laps I can know that something something I haven't finished and the other ways is I will prioritize my to do this so that I can finish the more.

✓ I take notes and put them in front of my laptop so that the next day, when I open my laptop, I can see what I have not finished. Another way is to prioritize my to-do list so that I can finish more.

Use them to avoid repeating the notes. The phrase what I have not finished is a clear noun clause that identifies the unfinished tasks.

× I will So take the notes and put the notes in front of my laptop so that next day when I open my laps I can know that something something I haven't finished and the other ways is I will prioritize my to do this so that I can finish the more.

✓ I take notes and put them in front of my laptop so that the next day, when I open my laptop, I can see what I have not finished. Another way is to prioritize my to-do list so that I can finish more.

Use the before next day because a specific following day is meant. Do not use the before more in finish more because more is being used as a general quantity.

× I will So take the notes and put the notes in front of my laptop so that next day when I open my laps I can know that something something I haven't finished and the other ways is I will prioritize my to do this so that I can finish the more.

✓ I take notes and put them in front of my laptop so that the next day, when I open my laptop, I can see what I have not finished. Another way is to prioritize my to-do list so that I can finish more.

More can be used without the when it means a greater quantity of tasks. Finish the more is not grammatical in this context; finish more is correct.

× I will So take the notes and put the notes in front of my laptop so that next day when I open my laps I can know that something something I haven't finished and the other ways is I will prioritize my to do this so that I can finish the more.

✓ I take notes and put them in front of my laptop so that the next day, when I open my laptop, I can see what I have not finished. Another way is to prioritize my to-do list so that I can finish more.

The subject another way is singular, so it must be followed by is, not are. The corrected sentence also avoids the unclear phrase the other ways.