Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct, clear and concise. Start with a topic sentence that answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct grammar and avoid repetition. Link ideas with simple connectors (for example, 'but' or 'however').

예시: Not really. I find it difficult to remember names and dates. For example, I often forget people’s names at parties, but I remember general facts better because I use notes on my phone to help me.

제안: Answer with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific example and explain what you do to prevent it. Use correct verb forms and articles, and keep to two or three sentences. Use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to show cause and effect.

예시: Yes, I have. I often forget names and addresses, so I write them down immediately. For instance, when I meet someone new I save their contact on my phone to avoid forgetting them later.

제안: Begin with a direct topic sentence and then add one or two specific details about how and why you use the item. Use proper sentence structure and connectors like 'and' or 'for example'.

예시: My phone is the most important thing I need to remember every day. I use it to store reminders, contacts and appointments, for example I set alarms and calendar events so I don’t miss meetings.

제안: Answer with a clear topic sentence, then describe your method with specific steps. Use correct vocabulary (e.g. 'sticky notes', 'reminders') and clearer linking words like 'and' or 'also'. Keep it within three sentences.

예시: I use sticky notes and digital reminders to remember important tasks. I put sticky notes around the house for immediate tasks and set alarms or calendar reminders on my phone for timed events, which helps me stay organised.

× I have to admit my memory is not work at all in terms of names and dates, so it's kind of funny because when I was young, I tried to memorize day at the rest of my house and I felt terrible.

✓ I have to admit my memory does not work at all for names and dates, so it's kind of funny because when I was young, I tried to memorize every day the names of people in my house and I felt terrible.

The sentence uses incorrect verb form 'is not work' instead of 'does not work' (present tense with third person singular structure). 'In terms of' is awkward here; use 'for'. 'Memorize day at the rest of my house' is unclear and ungrammatical; likely intended 'memorize every day the names of people in my house'. Suggest using clear subject-verb agreement and natural prepositions and word order.

× all the time in terms of name, addresses and faces I never have in my memory those kind of things, but I always try to make a point.

✓ All the time, when it comes to names, addresses and faces, I never have those kinds of things in my memory, but I always try to make an effort.

The original sentence lacks proper capitalization and natural word order. 'In terms of' is acceptable but 'when it comes to' is more natural. 'Name' should be plural 'names'; 'those kind of things' should be 'those kinds of things' or 'that kind of thing'. 'Make a point' is incorrect here; 'make an effort' fits the meaning. Fix capitalization and noun plurality.

× I read down eight things to don't forget it.

✓ I write down eight things so I don't forget them.

'Read down' is incorrect; the correct action is 'write down'. The sentence uses 'to don't forget' which is ungrammatical; after 'so' use 'I don't' or after 'to' use base verb 'not forget' (to not forget). Also 'it' should agree with plural 'things' -> 'them'. Use correct verb form and pronoun agreement.

× Oh, absolutely. I need my phone. I try down everything in notes to specify when I have to do something, who I have to invite for that or who I have to call and is my easy tool every day.

✓ Oh, absolutely. I need my phone. I write everything down in notes to specify when I have to do something, who I have to invite, or who I have to call, and it is my easiest tool every day.

'I try down everything' is incorrect; correct phrasal verb is 'write down'. Word order and missing pronoun: use 'write everything down' and 'it is my easiest tool'. 'Who I have to invite for that' is awkward; omit 'for that'. Ensure present tense consistency and proper pronoun use.

× I'm the sticker man so I have stickers in all my house and in all my notebooks to remind me I have to do something in this specific time of the day, so I combine the sticker notes with my cell phone and my refinement reminders and I do and best for me.

✓ I'm the sticker man, so I have stickers all over my house and in all my notebooks to remind me I have to do something at a specific time of the day. I combine the sticky notes with my cell phone reminders, and it works best for me.

Several article and word choice errors: 'in all my house' should be 'all over my house'. 'Sticker notes' is better as 'sticky notes'. 'Refinement reminders' is unclear; use 'reminders'. 'I do and best for me' is ungrammatical; intended 'it works best for me'. Also add comma after introductory clause and split into two sentences for clarity. Use correct prepositions ('at a specific time') and articles where needed.