Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural, concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases like "repeat memory" and "my first birthdays."

예시: Not really. I’m not very good at memorising things, so I often forget important dates or advice. For example, I sometimes miss friends’ birthdays, so I usually set reminders on my phone.

제안: Answer directly and correct grammar (avoid "I've ever"). Give a specific example and use linking words to show consequence. Clarify unclear phrases like "whisper days."

예시: Yes, I have. For instance, I once forgot a close friend’s birthday, so I started setting calendar reminders and alerts on my phone to avoid repeating the mistake.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence listing the main daily items you must remember (appointments, tasks, advice). Use specific details and linking words; avoid fillers like "you know" and vague phrases.

예시: Daily I need to remember appointments, work tasks and important advice from colleagues. Therefore, I plan my day in the morning and set reminders for meetings and deadlines on my phone.

제안: This answer is mostly clear but can be improved by starting with a direct topic sentence and adding one concrete method with a brief example. Remove fillers like "like" and "maybe."

예시: I usually set multiple reminders and keep notes on my phone. For example, I create calendar events with alarms and write short to-do notes so I don't miss tests or appointments.

× Well I would say I don't actually have a good repeat memory, so I'm usually forget things about important advice or important days, and I even forget about my first birthdays.

✓ Well, I would say I don't actually have a good memory for remembering things, so I usually forget important advice or important dates, and I even forgot my first birthday.

The phrase 'repeat memory' is incorrect collocation; use 'memory for remembering things' or simply 'memory'. 'I'm usually forget' mixes present continuous 'I'm' with base verb 'forget' incorrectly; correct is 'I usually forget' (present simple) for habitual actions. 'Important days' is better phrased as 'important dates'. 'My first birthdays' is plural but refers to a single event; use singular 'my first birthday'. Also adjust tense to 'forgot' when speaking about a past event that happened once. Suggestion: Use 'I usually forget' for habits and singular for single events like 'my first birthday.'

× Of course, yes, I've ever forgotten something really important.

✓ Of course, yes, I have forgotten something really important.

The adverb 'ever' is incorrectly used with the present perfect here. 'I've ever forgotten' is ungrammatical; the correct form is 'I have forgotten' or 'I've forgotten.' If you want to ask about experience, 'Have you ever forgotten...?' is correct. Suggestion: Use 'I have forgotten' to state past experiences without 'ever.'

× I even forget important birthdays or pieces of advice that some of my closest friends give me.

✓ I sometimes forget important birthdays or pieces of advice that some of my closest friends give me.

'I even forget' is grammatical but 'even' is awkward here; for habitual action use frequency adverb 'sometimes' or 'often.' The sentence otherwise uses present simple correctly to describe habits. Suggestion: Replace 'even' with a clearer adverb of frequency like 'sometimes.'

× So other time I have to really set reminders on my phone like whisper days are coming or like that.

✓ So other times I have to set reminders on my phone, like 'birthday is coming' or something like that.

The phrase 'other time' should be plural 'other times' for repeated occasions. 'Really set' is informal; 'have to set' is sufficient. 'Whisper days are coming' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended 'birthdays are coming' or 'a birthday is coming.' 'Or like that' is informal and vague; use 'or something like that.' Suggestion: Use 'other times' for repeated occasions and replace unclear phrases with standard expressions.

× Well, on a daily basis I have to remember in both things or like advice because these are more key.

✓ Well, on a daily basis I have to remember both things and advice because these are more important.

The preposition 'remember in' is incorrect; the verb 'remember' does not take 'in' here. 'Both things or like advice' is awkward—use 'both things and advice'. 'More key' is nonstandard; use 'more important.' Suggestion: Use 'remember both X and Y' and prefer 'important' over 'key' in this comparative structure.

× So I really need to, you know, take those or you know, set plan of reminders of the important advanced appointments.

✓ So I really need to, you know, write those down or set a plan of reminders for important upcoming appointments.

'Take those' is vague; 'write those down' or 'take note of them' is clearer. 'Set plan of reminders' is missing an article and should be 'set a plan of reminders' or 'set reminder alerts.' 'Important advanced appointments' is unnatural; use 'important upcoming appointments.' Suggestion: Use clear verbs like 'write down' and correct noun phrases with articles ('a plan') and natural adjective order ('upcoming appointments').

× Well, I would say like I have to make sure I don't miss important appointments or tests so that I set reminders.

✓ Well, I would say I have to make sure I don't miss important appointments or tests, so I set reminders.

The sentence is mostly correct but 'so that I set reminders' is awkward; use coordinating conjunction 'so' with main clause 'I set reminders.' Alternatively, use 'so that I don't miss them, I set reminders.' Ensure consistent clause structure. Suggestion: Use 'so I set reminders' or 'so that I don't miss them, I set reminders' for clarity.

× Or maybe I keep notes on my phone to stay organized.

✓ Or maybe I keep notes on my phone to stay organized.

This sentence is grammatically correct in present simple to describe a habitual action. No change needed. Suggestion: None.