Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Start with a direct topic sentence that clearly answers the question (Yes or No), then add one or two brief supporting details. Use correct verb forms and natural phrasing, for example: “Yes, I’m quite good at remembering things.” Also avoid redundancy and limit to no more than 3–4 sentences. Use a linking word if you add a reason (e.g., because, so).

예시: Yes, I’m quite good at remembering things because I practice active recall every day. For example, I review important facts in the evening and test myself the next morning.

제안: The answer is short and direct but sounds unnatural (use correct tense and natural phrasing) and gives no supporting detail. A better response would acknowledge possibility and give a brief example or explanation using a linking word (e.g., but, however, for example). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Not really — I rarely forget important things because I always set reminders on my phone. For example, I use calendar alerts for appointments so I don’t miss them.

제안: This reply is vague and unrealistic. Provide a topic sentence that specifies key items you need to remember (appointments, tasks, deadlines), then give one or two specific examples and use linking words (such as for example or such as). Keep the answer concise and coherent.

예시: I need to remember things like appointments, work tasks, and household chores. For example, I keep track of meetings and grocery lists so I don’t forget urgent errands.

제안: This answer is understandable but the tense and phrasing can be improved. Use a natural present tense and expand slightly with one supporting detail about your method and why it helps, using a linking word (e.g., because, so). Avoid overly short replies.

예시: I usually write important tasks in my phone’s notes app and set reminders because that ensures I get notifications at the right time. For instance, I set an alarm for bill payments so I never miss the due date.

× Yeah, I am very remembering from.

✓ Yeah, I have a very good memory.

The original uses 'am remembering' incorrectly. 'Remember' in stative meaning is not used in continuous form; also 'from' is incorrect. Use a simple stative verb or noun phrase: 'I have a very good memory.' This fits the present simple state and answers the question about ability to memorise things.

× No, I never forgot something important.

✓ No, I have never forgotten anything important.

The question asks about experience up to now, so the present perfect is required ('have never forgotten') rather than simple past 'forgot'. Also 'something' is less natural in negative statements; 'anything' is preferred.

× I remember everything in my daily life.

✓ I remember most things in my daily life.

The present simple 'remember' is acceptable for habitual actions, but 'everything' is absolute and unlikely; 'most things' is more natural. If the student truly means perfect recall, 'I remember everything' could stand, but commonly use 'most things.' The error flagged is present tense nuance and choice of quantifier.

× I will write down things with my phone.

✓ I write things down on my phone.

The question asked 'How do you remember...?' which expects a habitual present answer, so use present simple 'I write things down on my phone.' Also use the correct word order 'write things down' and preposition 'on my phone.' Using 'will' implies future rather than a habitual method.