Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response grammatical, direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating ability, then give one specific example using linking words. Avoid filler words and incorrect phrasing (e.g., 'I'm good at memorizing', not 'a good in memorize').

예시: Yes, I'm fairly good at memorizing things. For example, I always remember who gave me gifts and what they gave, such as food or small items, because I pay attention to those occasions.

제안: Answer directly and provide a clear, grammatical example with a reason or consequence. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'once' to structure the response, and avoid fragmented phrases.

예시: Yes, I have. For example, once I forgot my passport when I was travelling for work, so I had to delay my trip and sort out a replacement, which was stressful.

제안: Give a concise main statement and then specific daily items, using linking words to list them. Correct repetition and unclear phrases (e.g., 'going for hours') by using precise vocabulary like 'appointments' or 'classes'.

예시: In daily life I mainly need to remember times and appointments. For instance, I always remember when my classes start and when I need to leave for work or meetings.

제안: Provide a clear method and one example; use correct grammar and linking words. Explain a memory strategy (e.g., writing notes, setting reminders) and mention mental state as supporting detail rather than the only reason.

예시: I tend to remember important things better when I'm relaxed and well-rested. Also, I use strategies like making a short checklist or setting phone reminders to ensure I don't forget important tasks.

× Yeah, I think I'm a good in memorize things because I only memorize, uh, whose people give me a gift, some yeah, food, some gas, that kinds of thing I usually remember right.

✓ Yeah, I think I'm good at memorizing things because I only remember what people give me as gifts, like food or gas; those kinds of things I usually remember.

The phrase 'a good in memorize' is incorrect: 'good' should be followed by 'at' and the verb should be a gerund ('memorizing'). Also 'whose people give me a gift' is ungrammatical; use 'what people give me as gifts'. 'That kinds' should be 'those kinds' (demonstrative and plural agreement). Use consistent verbs: 'remember' rather than 'memorize' later. Improve fluency by reordering and using parallel items. Grammar problem types involved: 8 (Verb + -ing form), 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs).

× Yeah, I forget my you my passport. So when I go for manpowers usually.

✓ Yeah, I forgot my passport when I went to apply for manpower services.

The present form 'forget' is incorrect for a past event; use past tense 'forgot'. Remove extraneous words ('my you my'). 'So when I go for manpowers usually' is unclear and needs past tense and clearer noun phrase: 'when I went to apply for manpower services' or similar. This fixes tense and clarity. Grammar problem types involved: 5 (Past tense issue), 26 (Sentence structure errors).

× I usually remember what time it it is for going for hours and what time it is for starting a class that that's kinds of things I usually remember in daily life.

✓ I usually remember what time I need to leave and what time a class starts; those are the kinds of things I remember in daily life.

The original uses incorrect and repeated prepositions ('for going for hours') and redundant 'it it'. Use 'what time I need to leave' or 'what time to leave' and 'what time a class starts'. Fix demonstrative phrase to 'those are the kinds of things'. This addresses preposition misuse and sentence structure. Grammar problem types involved: 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions), 26 (Sentence structure errors), 1 (Singular and plural issue).

× I exactly remember when I feel relaxed or my mind fresh and or comfort update. That's kind of the day I remembers all important things.

✓ I remember best when I feel relaxed and my mind is fresh and comfortable; on those kinds of days I remember all important things.

Use present simple 'remember' with condition 'when I feel relaxed'; 'my mind fresh' needs a verb 'is' and 'comfort update' is incorrect — use 'comfortable'. 'That's kind of the day' should be pluralized to 'on those kinds of days'. Also 'I remembers' is wrong for subject-verb agreement; use 'I remember'. This fixes verb forms, adjective use, and subject-verb agreement. Grammar problem types involved: 8 (Verb + -ing form), 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs), 27 (Subject-verb agreement errors)