Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (verb forms and articles), avoid filler sounds, and keep it concise (max 3–4 sentences). Use a linking word to explain the reason. For example, replace 'I'm not good at memorizing' with 'I'm not very good at memorising' and say why: 'because I find it difficult and I prefer to use other tools.'

예시: I'm not very good at memorising. Because I find it difficult, I usually rely on notes or digital reminders instead of trying to remember things by heart.

제안: Start with a direct, grammatically correct response (use present perfect or simple past appropriately). Provide a short reason and a specific example. Use a linking word such as 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas. Avoid repeating phrases.

예시: I haven't forgotten anything important recently because I always record events in my phone calendar. For example, I set reminders for meetings and bill due dates so I never miss them.

제안: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details. Correct grammar (plural/singular, articles) and finish your thoughts. Use linking phrases like 'for example' or 'such as' to list items you must remember.

예시: I need to remember appointments and deadlines in my daily life. For example, I keep track of meetings with friends or work deadlines because missing them can cause problems with other people and my schedule.

제안: Respond briefly and clearly. Use correct tense and subject-verb agreement, remove unnecessary phrases like 'I said already', and complete the sentence. Add one supporting detail about how you use the tool (e.g., setting multiple alerts).

예시: I use my phone calendar to remember important things. I set events with two alerts—one a day before and another an hour before—so I don't forget appointments.

× I'm not good at memorizing. Actually I don't like memorize because it's uh, bit hard to me and I've been, I'm being lazy when I have to memorize something.

✓ I'm not good at memorizing. Actually, I don't like memorizing because it's a bit hard for me and I am lazy when I have to memorize something.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'memorize' after 'like' (should be gerund), awkward 'bit hard to me' (wrong prepositional phrase), incorrect progressive 'I'm being lazy' (use simple present for habitual state). Suggestions: use gerunds after verbs of preference (like + -ing), use 'hard for me' to show difficulty, and use simple present 'I am lazy' or 'I'm lazy' to describe a general habit. Grammar problem type IDs applied: 8 (Verb + -ing form), 6 (Present tense issue), 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions), 27 (Subject-verb agreement/habitual form).

× I'm not forgot something important because I don't like memorize.

✓ I haven't forgotten anything important because I don't like memorizing.

Errors: 'I'm not forgot' mixes present 'I'm' with past participle incorrectly; correct present perfect is 'I haven't forgotten'. Also 'don't like memorize' requires gerund 'memorizing'. Suggestions: use present perfect to talk about past actions affecting the present ('I haven't forgotten'), and use gerund after 'like'. Grammar problem type IDs applied: 5 (Past tense issue), 8 (Verb + -ing form).

× I always take a note in my calendar so that I don't forget something important.

✓ I always make a note in my calendar so that I don't forget anything important.

Errors: 'take a note' is non-idiomatic; correct collocation is 'make a note' or 'take notes'. Also 'something important' is less natural than 'anything important' in negative/avoidance context. Suggestions: use common collocations and adjust pronouns/quantifiers for negative contexts. Grammar problem type IDs applied: 8 (Verb + -ing form for consistency), 14 (Incorrect use of quantifiers).

× Hmm, I need to remember some appointment with people that don't forget. Appointment is important because that shows my.

✓ Hmm, I need to remember some appointments with people so they don't forget. Appointments are important because they show my reliability.

Errors: 'some appointment' should be plural 'some appointments' for general statements; 'with people that don't forget' is unclear—intended meaning likely 'so they don't forget' or 'so I don't forget to meet them'. Second sentence 'Appointment is important because that shows my.' is incomplete and missing noun after 'my'. Suggestions: make noun number agree with general statements, clarify the clause about why appointments matter, and complete the thought (e.g., 'show my reliability' or 'show that I am reliable'). Grammar problem type IDs applied: 1 (Singular and plural issue), 26 (Sentence structure errors), 19 (Incorrect comparison/object implicitly), 12 (Incorrect use of pronouns).

× I said already but I use my phone calendar. That make alert to me so that I can't forget something important and also.

✓ I already said that, and I use my phone's calendar. It gives me an alert so that I won't forget anything important.

Errors: 'I said already' is awkward order; 'I use my phone calendar' needs possessive 'phone's calendar'; 'That make alert to me' has wrong verb form and structure—use 'it gives me an alert' or 'it alerts me'. 'so that I can't forget' is incorrect modal meaning; use 'so that I won't forget' or 'so I don't forget'. The sentence also ends with an incomplete 'and also.' Suggestions: fix word order for adverbs, use possessive for tools, use correct verb forms and collocations ('alerts me', 'gives me an alert'), and use future/modal appropriately for prevention of forgetting. Grammar problem type IDs applied: 6 (Present tense issue), 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions/possessive), 20 (Incorrect adverb placement), 21 (Incorrect passive/voice).