Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify your main idea with a direct topic sentence, avoid filler sounds and pronunciation errors, and use relevant vocabulary. Keep it concise (1–3 sentences). For example, say you are not good at memorising, give one clear reason, and avoid unrelated words like "marriage" or "robotic."

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. I often forget details because I don't use consistent routines to review information, so important facts slip my mind.

제안: Answer directly with a clear past example, use correct tense, and reduce hesitations. State the situation, what you forgot, and the result in 2–3 sentences using linking words like "one time" or "for example."

예시: Yes, definitely. For example, one Saturday I forgot it was my day off, so I woke up early and prepared to go to the office, which wasted a lot of time.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence about what you need to remember, then give specific examples (appointments, bills, tasks). Use linking words like "for instance" or "such as" and avoid vague phrases.

예시: I need to remember practical things such as appointments, deadlines and grocery items. For instance, I always note down meetings and bill due dates so I don't miss them.

제안: Give a clear, natural description of your method with logical sequencing and realistic habits. Use appropriate time expressions (e.g., "afterwards," "regularly") and avoid saying you review every 5 minutes unless true; instead explain a practical review schedule.

예시: I usually write notes and highlight key points on my phone or notebook. Then I review them later that day and again the next morning, which helps the information stick.

× UN unfortunately I am a I'm not a person who good at marriage thing because in my opinion I always forget some Chinese factor in uh see in many situation which can be the robotic in my daily life.

✓ Unfortunately, I'm not a person who is good at memorising things because, in my opinion, I always forget some important factors in many situations which can be problematic in my daily life.

Pronoun and noun usage is incorrect: 'who good at marriage thing' is nonsensical and likely misused pronoun/word. Also missing verb 'is' after 'who'. 'Chinese factor' seems wrong contextually; replaced with 'important factors'. 'Robotic' is incorrect adjective for the intended meaning; replaced with 'problematic'. Suggestion: ensure correct relative clause structure ('person who is good at...'), choose appropriate nouns, and check adjective meanings.

× Yes, definitely is is happen and occur with me on or with when it's nerve Saturday.

✓ Yes, this definitely has happened to me on a Saturday.

Tense and auxiliary errors: 'is is happen and occur with me' mixes present and past forms; correct past perfect/simple passive: 'has happened' or 'happened'. 'Nerve Saturday' is incorrect word choice; likely 'never' or specific time 'one Saturday' — chosen 'on a Saturday'. Suggestion: use simple past or present perfect for past events and choose correct time expressions.

× I always, uh, forget that it's is my day off and I get up very early to prepare and, uh, go to the working office.

✓ I always forget that it's my day off and get up very early to prepare and go to work.

Tense and auxiliary duplication: 'it's is' duplicates verb 'is'. Use present simple 'forget' for habitual actions. 'Go to the working office' is unidiomatic; use 'go to work'. Suggestion: remove duplicated verbs, use natural collocations ('go to work').

× Uh, with me, having a note is play a crucial role in my day life and assist me, uh, firm that I can control and remember all the factor and the information in my life.

✓ For me, having notes plays a crucial role in my daily life and helps me be sure that I can control and remember all the factors and information in my life.

Pronoun and verb form errors: 'with me' should be 'for me'. 'Having a note is play' mixes forms; use 'having notes plays'. 'Assist me, uh, firm' is incorrect; use 'helps me be sure'. 'Factor' should be plural 'factors'. Suggestion: use proper prepositions ('for me'), subject-verb agreement ('plays'), and correct collocations ('help + object + infinitive').

× My methodology is quite crazy. First, I always take note and highlight the unforgettable memories in my book or smartphone. After that I will read already this information after each 5 minutes.

✓ My method is quite unusual. First, I always take notes and highlight memorable items in my notebook or smartphone. After that I read this information every five minutes.

Verb form and adverb placement issues: 'take note' should be plural 'take notes' for habit. 'Unforgettable memories' is odd for things to remember; 'memorable items' fits better. 'I will read already this information after each 5 minutes' mixes future and adverb placement; use present simple 'I read' for habitual action and 'every five minutes' for frequency. Suggestion: choose correct verb forms for habits (present simple), use natural adverb placement, and use correct count/plural forms.