Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 用词与表达需更自然准确，句子不要过长且避免用错词（如“aggravate”用法不当）。回答应先简短直接回答“yes/no”，然后用一两句具体例子支持。可用连词简洁连接观点与细节。

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. I usually repeat important information several times and write key points in my planner, which helps me recall dates and tasks more easily.

제안: 不要绝对化地说“从不忘记”，这不自然且可能不真实。先给直接简短回答，然后说明常用的方法并举具体例子。注意语法（例如动名词或句子结构）。

예시: Actually, I rarely forget important things because I use several strategies. For example, I jot down keywords for tasks in my calendar and set reminders on my phone, which helps me stay on top of appointments.

제안: 回答应先概括要记住的主要事项，然后用一两句具体说明原因。注意语法（如主谓一致："remember these things makes"应为"remembering these things makes"）及连贯性。

예시: As a lawyer, I need to remember client meetings, court dates and deadlines. Remembering these commitments is crucial because it helps me maintain professionalism and build trust with clients.

제안: 结构要更简洁：先说明主要方法，然后解释原因或举例。避免冗长重复，注意动名词与从句（"is that writing"可改为"is writing"或"is to write"）。可加连词使句子更自然。

예시: I use several techniques, but the most effective is writing keywords for tasks in my calendar. This not only records the task but also links it to a specific date, so I can quickly check what needs to be done.

× Of course, because I always repeat important things several times to aggravate my impression of them, and sometimes I even write them in my schedule to make sure I remember them.

✓ Of course, because I always repeat important things several times to aggravate my impression of them, and sometimes I even write them in my schedule to make sure I remember them.

句子本身并不需要更改动词的 -ing 形式，但短语 "to aggravate my impression of them" 用词不当。这里应使用 "to reinforce my impression of them" 或 "to strengthen my memory of them"，因为 "aggravate" 通常表示使恶化，不符合语境。建议用法改为不涉及 -ing 形式的替换。

× Well, to be honest, I never forget anything and I'm quite proud of it because I have many ways to remember important appointments and meetings. For example, write the keywords of the tasks in my schedule.

✓ Well, to be honest, I never forget anything and I'm quite proud of it because I have many ways to remember important appointments and meetings. For example, I write the keywords of the tasks in my schedule.

原句中的示例句子缺少主语和正确的时态。前面使用现在时态描述习惯（"I never forget... I have many ways"），因此示例也应使用一般现在时并包含主语："I write..."。建议始终在独立句子中包括主语并保持时态一致。

× Well, I'm a lawyer, so it's important for me to remember appointments and meetings with my clients and colleagues because they're a significant part of my work and remember these things makes me more reliable for them.

✓ Well, I'm a lawyer, so it's important for me to remember appointments and meetings with my clients and colleagues because they're a significant part of my work and remembering these things makes me more reliable to them.

错误有两处：一是从句中动名词短语应使用动名词 "remembering" 以作主语，原句直接用动词 "remember" 导致结构不正确（属于句子结构/动词形式问题，按题单列为主谓一致类）。二是搭配问题，正确说法为 "more reliable to them" 或更自然的 "more reliable for them" 实际上应使用 "to them"。建议把不定式/动词改为动名词并修正介词搭配。

× Well, I have a lot of ways to remember important things, but the most helpful way is that writing keywords of tasks in my schedule or calendar, because I can remember the corresponding dates at the same time in this way.

✓ Well, I have a lot of ways to remember important things, but the most helpful way is writing keywords of tasks in my schedule or calendar, because I can remember the corresponding dates at the same time.

原句中 "the most helpful way is that writing..." 结构不正确。作为表语，应使用动名词短语或不定式："the most helpful way is writing..." 或 "the most helpful way is to write..."。另外句尾的 "in this way" 冗余可去掉。建议使用动名词或不定式并简化句子。