Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct minor grammar (e.g., 'practice' -> 'practised' or 'practice them daily' -> 'practised them daily'), and use a clearer linking phrase. Give one concise reason and one specific example. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I'm good at memorising things because I regularly train with aptitude tests and repeat key steps. For example, when studying mathematics I practised important formulas every day, which helped me recall them quickly in exams.

제안: Improve clarity and fluency by removing fillers (umm, uh) and organising the answer with a clear topic sentence plus one concise supporting detail. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions (e.g., 'I usually organise my papers beforehand to avoid forgetting anything').

예시: I rarely forget important things because I organise documents and make checklists before exams or interviews. For instance, I prepare all necessary papers the night before and put them in a dedicated folder so I don't forget anything.

제안: Be specific and concise: state the key items you remember, explain one method, and avoid repetition and fillers. Use linking words (for example, also) and correct phrase choices ('keep a notepad to write important tasks and keep important items close').

예시: I need to remember daily tasks and small personal items, so I keep a notepad to write down errands and appointments. I also place important items like my phone and keys in a fixed spot so I notice them before leaving.

제안: Use clearer vocabulary and sentence structure (e.g., 'digital calendar' not 'fonts calendar'), remove fillers, and give one concrete example of how reminders help you. Use linking words like 'also' correctly.

예시: I use a digital calendar with alerts to remember meetings, interviews and important calls. I also keep a physical reminder calendar in my room to write down tasks and check them each morning.

× Yes, I'm quite good at memorizing things because I enjoy aptitude test and I train myself to remember formulas and problem solving steps.

✓ Yes, I'm quite good at memorizing things because I enjoy aptitude tests and I train myself to remember formulas and problem-solving steps.

The noun 'aptitude test' should be plural 'aptitude tests' to match the general statement about enjoying that activity. 'Problem solving' used as a compound modifier before 'steps' should be hyphenated as 'problem-solving' to clarify the relationship. Suggestion: use plural for general activities and hyphenate compound adjectives.

× For example, when I studied mathematics, I often memorized key formulas and practice them daily, which helped me recall them quickly during exams.

✓ For example, when I studied mathematics, I often memorized key formulas and practiced them daily, which helped me recall them quickly during exams.

The parallel verb structure requires past tense 'practiced' to match 'memorized' because the time frame is in the past. 'Practice' is base form; use past participle/past simple 'practiced'. Suggestion: keep verbs in the same tense when describing completed past routines.

× Usually I'm a person who will keep things beforehand so that forgetting can be avoided.

✓ Usually I am someone who keeps things in advance so that I can avoid forgetting them.

'A person who will keep' is awkward; 'someone who keeps' is more natural. 'Beforehand' is better expressed as 'in advance'. Also include the object 'them' to refer back to 'things' so the pronoun reference is clear. Suggestion: use consistent subject forms and include clear pronouns.

× I will arrange my papers and documents whenever I have exams or interviews and to umm, mention about uh item or object that have missed is uh, not aware.

✓ I arrange my papers and documents whenever I have exams or interviews, and I make a note of any items I have misplaced or forgotten.

The original mixes future 'I will arrange' with present habitual intent; simple present 'I arrange' or 'I make a habit of arranging' is better. The clause 'to mention about uh item or object that have missed is uh, not aware' is ungrammatical: use 'any items I have misplaced or forgotten'. 'Have missed' is incorrect verb choice; use 'misplaced' or 'forgotten'. Suggestion: use clear, concise phrasing and correct verb forms.

× Usually I do keep a notepad with me so that I can enlist all the, uh, important things and have a track on it.

✓ Usually I keep a notepad with me so that I can list all the important things and keep track of them.

'Enlist' is incorrect in this context; 'list' is the proper verb. 'Have a track on it' is unidiomatic; use 'keep track of them' and include pronoun 'them' to refer to 'important things'. Remove unnecessary 'do' unless used for emphasis. Suggestion: use common collocations like 'keep a notepad', 'list', and 'keep track of'.

× Moreover, that uh, I do keep uh, in the objects, which is important for me.

✓ Moreover, I keep those objects that are important to me close by.

Original sentence fragments and pronoun use are unclear. 'That uh, I do keep uh, in the objects' is ungrammatical. Use 'those objects that are important to me' and add 'close by' for the intended meaning. Suggestion: restructure sentences to clearly state subject, verb and object.

× It's closer to me so that I can have an uh, every time I'll have an attention on it.

✓ They are kept close to me so that I can pay attention to them at all times.

'It's closer to me' mismatches plural antecedent; use 'they are' or 'they're kept close to me'. 'Every time I'll have an attention on it' is ungrammatical; use 'pay attention to them at all times'. Suggestion: match number between subject and pronoun and use correct adverbial expressions like 'at all times'.

× I will make sure that I have updated in my fonts calendar as a reminder for the important things like meetings or interviews or any calls to attend.

✓ I make sure that I update my phone's calendar as a reminder for important things like meetings, interviews, or calls I need to attend.

Use simple present 'I make sure' and 'I update' for habitual actions instead of 'I will make sure' plus awkward passive 'have updated in my fonts calendar'. 'Fonts' is likely 'phone's'. Correct possessive 'phone's calendar' and word order 'calls I need to attend'. Suggestion: use simple present for routines and correct noun forms.

× Uh, Also within my uh, room, I have an uh, reminder calendar so that I can note down.

✓ Also, in my room I have a reminder calendar so that I can write things down.

Reduce filler 'uh' and use natural preposition 'in my room'. 'Note down' is fine but 'write things down' is more complete; include object 'things'. Suggestion: remove fillers and complete the verb phrase with its object.