Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Are you good at memorising things?
수험생
To be honest I'm not good at memorising thing for now. I think my memory is getting weak girl and weaker compared to previous few years. I think my memory is good and.
시험관
Have you ever forgotten something important?
수험생
Of course, last time I join a storytelling competition and. I forgot the content of the story on the stage. I feel very nervous and.
시험관
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
수험생
Since I'm a student, I need to memory memorize the academic things. For example, I need to memorize the biology content. There are a lot of chapters I need to memorize and also the details.
시험관
How do you remember important things?
수험생
It depends what I need to remember on. Like if it is the academic things, I will write on the paper and memorise it. If it is the thing I need to bring like before going out, I will write a note in my phone.
평가
총점
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
점수: 45.0제안: Be concise, correct grammar, and give a clear topic sentence followed by one or two supporting details. Avoid contradictions and unnecessary words. Use linking words (for example, however) if you contrast past and present. Also correct common mistakes: "memorising things", "my memory is getting weaker", and remove filler words like "girl" and repeated phrases.
예시: Honestly, I'm not very good at memorising things at the moment. For example, my memory has become weaker in the last few years, so I often need notes to remember names or appointments.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
점수: 50.0제안: Start with a clear yes/no and a concise description of the incident. Use appropriate past tense and connect ideas with linking words (for example, "because" or "so"). Add one specific consequence or feeling to make the answer complete. Limit to 2–3 sentences.
예시: Yes, I have. For instance, I once joined a storytelling competition and forgot my story on stage because I became very nervous, so I had to improvise and felt embarrassed afterwards.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
점수: 60.0제안: Provide a clear topic sentence and specific examples. Use correct verbs ("remember" or "memorize") and avoid repetition. Add one linking phrase to organize details (for example, "for example" or "in particular") and be specific about what aspects you remember (dates, formulas, terms).
예시: As a student, I need to remember academic material, especially biology. For example, I memorise chapter summaries, key terms and processes like cell division because there are many chapters with detailed facts.
How do you remember important things?
점수: 70.0제안: Give a direct topic sentence and two clear methods with linking words (for example, "for academic material" and "for daily tasks"). Use natural phrases (“it depends on what I need to remember”) and correct minor grammar ("write on paper" → "write on paper" or "write it down"). Provide one brief reason why each method helps.
예시: It depends on what I need to remember. For academic material I write notes on paper and use repetition to memorise them, while for daily tasks I put reminders on my phone so I don't forget things before I leave home.
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