Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答自然且有具体方法，但有赘词（umm）和少许重复。可用更简洁有力的句子开头明确观点，随后用一两个具体细节支持，使用连接词使逻辑更清晰。注意发音与连贯度，避免填充词。

예시: Yes, I'm fairly good at memorising things. I usually make brief notes and review them regularly, for example when learning vocabulary I write new words in a notebook and review them the next day, which helps consolidate my memory.

제안: 回答包含相关经历但语法与表达有错误（如 'homeworks'、冗长句）。建议用一到两句话清晰陈述事件并解释原因，使用连接词（because, so）更自然，注意单复数和时态。

예시: Yes. Once I missed a homework deadline because I had too many assignments at the same time, so I failed to submit it on time and had to accept a grade penalty.

제안: 回答不够清晰，存在词不达意和许多填充词，且有语法和词汇错误（如 'for try fails'），句子结构混乱。建议先列出一两件最重要的事项，用清晰简短的句子并用连接词补充原因或例子，减少停顿与犹豫。

예시: I need to remember simple daily tasks, such as locking the door when I enter a room, and more important things like submitting homework on time so I don't miss deadlines.

제안: 回答包含方法（写提醒）但表达不够精确，有语法和用词问题（'resemble things', 'on the reminder'）。建议直接说出主要策略，补充一两个具体例子或频率，并用连接词使结构更流畅。

예시: I usually write important tasks in my phone's reminder app and set alerts. For example, if I see classmates preparing for a presentation, I add a reminder so I won't forget to prepare mine on time.

× there was too much homeworks to do so I didn't hand in my homework on time.

✓ there was too much homework to do so I didn't hand in my homework on time.

“homework”是不可數名詞，不可用複數形式“homeworks”。在英語中不可數名詞在表示總量時用單數形式，應改為“homework”。建議：遇到集合性的任務或學校作業時，用“homework”而不是“homeworks”。

× for try fails, I need to close the door when I, uh, get in the room, uh, for big one uh, just like what I just said, uh, I need to hand in my homework on time.

✓ for small things, I need to close the door when I get into the room; for bigger things, like I just said, I need to hand in my homework on time.

原句中“for try fails”與“get in the room”用法不當且不自然。應用“for small things/for bigger things”來表達不同類型的需要；“get into the room”較常用且強調進入房間的動作。建議：用簡單、常見的片語如“for small things”“for bigger things”，動詞短語用“get into”來表示進入。

× Well sometimes I noticed seeing other people doing the resemble things and I'll be like oh I need to do this too.

✓ Well, sometimes I notice seeing other people doing similar things and I'll be like, 'Oh, I need to do this too.'

原句時態和詞形混用：如果描述習慣性或經常發生的情況，應使用一般現在時“notice”而非過去式“noticed”。“resemble things”用詞錯誤，應用形容詞“similar things”。此外需要逗號和引號來標示口語片語。建議：講述習慣或經常情況時用一般現在時；使用“similar”表示相似。

× I will write the important things down on the reminder so that I can remember this on time.

✓ I will write the important things down in a reminder so that I can remember them on time.

“on the reminder”用法不當，應說“in a reminder”或“on a reminder note”。此外“remember this”指代不明，應用複數代詞“them”指代“important things”。建議：使用“in a reminder”或“on a reminder note”，代詞要與先行詞數一致。

× Yes, once I forgot the submission deadline for my homework assignment because there was too much homeworks to do so I didn't hand in my homework on time.

✓ Yes, once I forgot the submission deadline for my homework assignment because there was too much homework to do, so I didn't hand in my homework on time.

此句主要時態為過去時，前半句使用“forgot”和“didn't hand in”正確，但原句缺少逗號分隔因果關係，且“too much homeworks”是數量錯誤（見前）。建議：保持過去時敘述，修正不可數名詞並加入逗號使句子更清晰。