Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は直接的で内容も具体的ですが、文法ミス（memorising→memorizingは変種だが一貫性）、語順や冗長さを改善できます。短く自然なトピック文を使い、補足で理由や具体例を1〜2文にまとめてください。また、接続詞（for example, however, because）を使って流れを整えましょう。

예시: I'm not very good at memorizing things, especially people's names. For example, I often recognize a face but can't remember the person's name, which is embarrassing when I meet them again.

제안: 内容は適切ですが、文法と語法の誤りが目立ちます（'I forgotten'→'I've forgotten'、余分な'I'）。また、文をつなぐために接続詞を使い、1文目で直答、2文目で具体例と感情を述べる構成に整えましょう。

예시: Yes, I have. I've forgotten important things several times; for example, last year I missed a meeting with a friend because I mixed up the date, and I felt really embarrassed.

제안: 答えは明確で具体例もありますが、語句の選び方と表現を自然にできます（'A to do list'は不自然）。接続詞で理由→例→対策の流れを整理し、語彙を正確に使いましょう。

예시: I need to remember daily tasks and appointments because I'm very busy. For example, I sometimes forget to take pills or miss meetings, so I use my phone's to-do list and reminders to stay organized.

제안: 内容が繰り返されており不自然な語順と不完全な文があります。まず直接に方法を示し、次に具体的な使い方（例：リマインダー、チェックリスト）を一文で説明するとよいです。語彙は 'to-do list' 'reminders' 'set alarms' を使い分けてください。

예시: I usually use the to-do list and reminders on my phone. For example, I set alarms for important tasks and make checklists for shopping so I don't forget anything.

× Yes, I have. I forgotten important things several times.

✓ Yes, I have. I have forgotten important things several times.

Incorrect use of the past participle: the present perfect requires 'have' + past participle. The sentence used 'I forgotten' without the auxiliary 'have'. Use 'I have forgotten' to form the present perfect tense correctly.

× For example, last year I missed a meeting with a friend because I mixed up the date and I felt really embarrassed I.

✓ For example, last year I missed a meeting with a friend because I mixed up the date, and I felt really embarrassed.

Extra pronoun and word order issue: 'embarrassed I' places the subject after the adjective and repeats the pronoun unnecessarily. Remove the extra 'I' and add a comma before 'and' to connect the clauses properly.

× For example, I often forget pills and meetings, so I use A to do list and phone reminders to stay organized.

✓ For example, I often forget pills and meetings, so I use a to-do list and phone reminders to stay organized.

Article and noun form: 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list' (lowercase 'a', hyphenated compound noun). Use the indefinite article 'a' before a singular countable noun and hyphenate 'to-do'.

× I often use To Do List in my phone.

✓ I often use the to-do list on my phone.

Article and preposition use: 'To Do List' should be a common noun 'to-do list' with the definite article 'the' if referring to a specific list you use. Also use the preposition 'on' with 'phone' rather than 'in'.

× I usually use it for shopping list or To Do List in.

✓ I usually use it for shopping lists or my to-do list.

Sentence structure and article use: 'shopping list' should be plural if general or 'a shopping list'; 'To Do List in' is incomplete. Replace with 'my to-do list' or 'a to-do list' and make 'shopping lists' plural for general use.