Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a brief example or detail using linking words. Avoid redundancy (e.g., “memory things” and “remember memories”).

예시: Yes, I’d say I have a good memory. For example, I can recall events from two years ago quite clearly, such as a family trip I took, which helps me remember dates and important details.

제안: Avoid absolute claims and use more natural phrasing. Give a short supporting detail or exception to sound realistic. Keep it concise and use linking words if adding detail.

예시: Not really — I can’t recall forgetting anything truly important. However, I sometimes misplace small things like keys, but I usually find them within a few hours.

제안: Lead with a clear topic sentence and organise the list with linking words. Be specific about the chores or ways you help and play to add content and interest.

예시: In my daily life I need to remember several tasks: firstly, household chores such as washing dishes and tidying my room; secondly, helping my family with shopping or cooking; and finally, setting aside time to play or relax with them in the evening.

제안: This answer is clear but can be improved by tightening language and adding a brief reason or result. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., “sticky notes” or “notes”) and a linking phrase to explain why the method works.

예시: I usually write important tasks on sticky notes and put them on the fridge, so I see them every time I go to the kitchen; this visual reminder helps me avoid forgetting appointments or errands.

× I am super good at memory things.

✓ I am very good at remembering things.

The phrase 'super good' is informal and 'memory things' is incorrect noun usage. Use the adverb 'very' with the adjective 'good' and the gerund 'remembering' after 'good at' to show ability. Suggestion: replace with 'I am very good at remembering things.'

× I can remember memories from two years ago.

✓ I can remember things from two years ago.

The noun 'memories' is redundant after 'remember'; 'remember' already implies memories. Use 'things' or omit the noun: 'remember things' or 'remember two years ago.' This corrects awkward repetition.

× No, I never have ever forgotten something important in my life.

✓ No, I have never forgotten anything important in my life.

The sentence uses redundant negatives 'never' and 'ever' together and 'something' is less natural with 'never'. Use the present perfect 'have never forgotten' with 'anything' for negative statements. Also place 'never' before the past participle: 'I have never forgotten.'

× I have to remember to do my chores, help my family and play with them in my daily life.

✓ I have to remember to do my chores, help my family, and play with them in my daily life.

This sentence is grammatical but needs a comma before the final item in the list (Oxford comma) for clarity. The error type from the list best matching is punctuation/structure; treated as sentence structure issue. Also 'in my daily life' is repetitive; consider 'every day' for natural phrasing: 'I have to remember to do my chores, help my family, and play with them every day.'

× I write them down on note sticky notes and then I stick them onto my fridge so I can always remember.

✓ I write them down on sticky notes and then stick them on my fridge so I can always remember.

The phrase 'note sticky notes' is redundant and incorrect word order. Use 'sticky notes'. Prepositions: 'stick on' or 'stick to' are both possible; 'on my fridge' is more natural than 'onto my fridge' here. Also omit the second subject 'I' for conciseness: 'then stick them on my fridge.'