Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản, dùng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng và tránh lỗi động từ/gerund. Trả lời trực tiếp, ngắn gọn (1-3 câu), sau đó thêm 1 câu chi tiết cụ thể. Dùng từ phù hợp (depend -> depends, memorize/memorising, learn quickly). Ví dụ: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề: "Yes, I'm quite good at memorising." rồi giải thích bằng một chi tiết cụ thể và một ví dụ ngắn.

예시: Yes, I'm quite good at memorising. I can learn facts by heart quickly because I use repetition and organise information into small chunks. For example, when I memorised vocabulary for an exam, I created flashcards and reviewed them every day.

제안: Cải thiện sự mạch lạc và dùng linking words hợp lý, sửa lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và từ vựng (small things that are not important, notebooks). Nên đưa ví dụ cụ thể và dùng linking words như 'however' hoặc 'but' để kết nối ý. Giữ câu ngắn gọn và tự nhiên.

예시: Generally, I have never forgotten anything crucial; however, I sometimes forget small items like my keys or a notebook. To avoid this, I always make lists and set reminders on my phone.

제안: Sửa cấu trúc câu và từ vựng (make a plan, daily routine, reminders). Trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích cụ thể bằng ví dụ về việc cần nhớ những việc gì và khi nào. Tránh lặp từ và dùng linking words như 'for example' hoặc 'such as'.

예시: At the moment I need to remember my daily study plan because I have an important exam. For example, I set reminders for study sessions, meal times, and exercise so I can balance studying, cooking and playing sports.

제안: Cải thiện ngữ pháp, thay 'thus' bằng từ phù hợp hoặc loại bỏ, dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng: topic sentence + methods + example. Sử dụng cụm từ chính xác (I remember, I am good at remembering, repeat things many times). Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về phương pháp (flashcards, reminders, schedules) để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

예시: I usually use simple methods to remember important things. For instance, I repeat key information several times, write notes in my phone and set reminders; sometimes I also use flashcards to review facts before exams.

× To be honest, that is really depend, but I believe that I could have memorizing things because I'm really good at learning by heart.

✓ To be honest, that really depends, but I believe that I can memorize things because I'm really good at learning by heart.

'is depend' is incorrect: the verb 'depend' requires the third person singular form 'depends' (subject 'that' -> singular). 'could have memorizing' is ungrammatical: use 'can memorize' to express ability in present. Use base verb 'memorize' after modal 'can'. Suggestions: use present simple 'depends' and 'can + base verb' for ability.

× I learned very quick but I still sometimes faced with difficult when I try to memory something.

✓ I learn very quickly, but I still sometimes face difficulties when I try to memorize something.

Mixed tenses: 'learned' (past) conflicts with present context; use present simple 'learn'. 'quick' should be adverb 'quickly'. 'faced with difficult' is wrong: use verb 'face' and plural noun 'difficulties'. 'try to memory' is incorrect: use 'try to memorize' (verb). Suggestions: keep consistent present tense, use adverb forms and correct verb-noun forms.

× Generally speaking I have never forgotten anything crucial, but sometimes I forget small things that not important for me like a key or some notebook because I always make lists and set reminder on my phone.

✓ Generally speaking, I have never forgotten anything crucial, but sometimes I forget small things that are not important to me, like a key or a notebook, because I always make lists and set reminders on my phone.

Missing auxiliary 'are' for 'that are not important'. Use 'to me' rather than 'for me' in this context. 'some notebook' incorrect article: use 'a notebook'. 'set reminder' should be plural 'set reminders' or 'set a reminder'. Suggestions: add 'are', use correct preposition 'to', and correct articles and pluralization.

× Recently I have an important exam, so I need to make plan every day.

✓ Recently I have an important exam, so I need to make a plan every day.

Missing article before 'plan'; use 'a plan' or 'plans'. 'Recently I have' is acceptable but consider 'I have had' if referring to ongoing period. Suggestions: include the indefinite article before countable noun.

× So I need to remember my plan, my new day with remind me to study, cooking or play sport.

✓ So I need to remember my plan and my new daily routine that reminds me to study, cook, or play sports.

Phrase 'my new day with remind me' is ungrammatical: use a noun phrase 'daily routine that reminds me'. Use parallel verbs in base form 'study, cook, or play'. 'play sport' should be 'play sports' or 'do sports'. Suggestions: use clear noun 'routine' and correct verb forms.

× To be honest, I thus remember important things in simple ways.

✓ To be honest, I therefore remember important things in simple ways.

'thus' is formal and awkward here; 'therefore' or 'so' is more natural. This is style more than grammar; no modal needed. Suggestions: use 'therefore' or 'so' for cause-effect.

× I don't tend to use complex ways because it's very hard to do so.

✓ I don't tend to use complex methods because it's very hard to do so.

'ways' is not wrong but 'methods' is more natural. Tense and structure are acceptable. Suggest using 'methods' for clarity.

× I just repeat the important things many times so I can good at remember.

✓ I just repeat the important things many times so I can get good at remembering them.

'can good at remember' is ungrammatical: use 'get good at' + gerund 'remembering'. Also add object 'them' for clarity. Suggestions: use 'get good at' + verb-ing and include pronoun for object.