Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence and give one or two specific examples. Use correct grammar (articles, verb forms) and avoid repetition. Limit to 2–4 sentences and use a linking word for clarity (for example, 'so' or 'because').

예시: Not really. I often have trouble remembering everyday details because I get busy with work. For example, I sometimes forget appointments or school schedules, so I write them in my calendar to avoid mistakes.

제안: Give a concise past example with correct tense and specific detail. Finish your sentence and explain the consequence briefly. Use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to show result.

예시: Yes. Once I forgot my house keys and was locked out for an hour, so I missed a university lecture. Because of that, I now set alarms and keep spare keys with a neighbour.

제안: Answer directly naming a few specific items you must remember. Use correct nouns and possessives, avoid unclear names, and connect ideas with linking words like 'and' or 'also'. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

예시: I need to remember my daily schedule, my children's activities, and where I put important items like my keys and wallet. I also try to remember appointments for work and study so I can plan my day well.

제안: Describe the method clearly and use specific words (e.g., 'calendar', 'reminder', 'to-do list'). Use 2–3 sentences and a linking word to explain why the method helps you.

예시: I use my phone calendar and set reminders for important tasks and appointments. This helps me because notifications prompt me at the right time, so I rarely miss things now.

× I'm not good at memorizing things. I always forget a important things like my kids or my schedule at school.

✓ I'm not good at memorizing things. I always forget important things like my kids' birthdays or my schedule at school.

The errors are misuse of the indefinite article 'a' with the plural noun 'things' and incorrect noun form 'a important things'. Use no article with a plural noun: 'important things'. Also 'my kids' should be possessive if referring to their birthdays or events; if meant simply 'my kids', keep 'my kids' but better specify what about them is forgotten. Suggestion: remove 'a' and make the noun plural or specify the singular noun with 'an' if needed (e.g., 'an important thing').

× I often forgotten something important such as my key house or my schedule at school, so I missed the lesson in my university, so I.

✓ I often forget something important, such as my house keys or my schedule at school, so I missed a lesson at university.

The verb form 'often forgotten' is incorrect; after 'often' use the simple present 'forget' for habitual actions. 'Key house' is incorrect word order; correct is 'house keys'. 'The lesson in my university' is unnatural: use 'a lesson at university'. Also remove the trailing incomplete phrase. Suggestion: use simple present for habits and correct noun order ('house keys').

× In my daily life I think I need to remember my many important things like Keith's house or Keith's car and and my schedule on work and study.

✓ In my daily life I need to remember many important things, like Keith's house and Keith's car, and my work and study schedule.

Errors: extra 'my' before 'many important things' is unnecessary; duplicate 'and and'; wrong preposition 'on' with 'work' and 'study'—use 'schedule for work and study' or 'work and study schedule'. Also punctuation and repetition reduce clarity. Suggestion: remove redundant words, fix prepositions to 'for' or restructure as 'my work and study schedule', and remove duplicate 'and'.

× I think this is the best important for me.

✓ I think this is the most important thing for me.

'Best important' is ungrammatical: use 'most important' to form the superlative with non-comparable adjectives. Also add 'thing' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'most important' or rephrase as 'the most important thing'.

× I use my phone and not which important in my life and I set up the acclaim to remind me to remember.

✓ I use my phone for important things in my life, and I set alarms to remind me.

Errors: 'and not which important in my life' is ungrammatical and misuses relative pronoun structure. 'Acclaim' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'alarm' or 'reminder'. Use plural 'alarms' or 'reminders' if multiple. Suggestion: simplify to 'I use my phone for important things' and 'I set alarms or reminders'.

× So I always forget this and I keep the acclaim.

✓ So I always forget this and I keep missing it despite the alarms.

'Keep the acclaim' is incorrect verb-object usage and wrong noun 'acclaim'. If intended 'keep forgetting' use continuous 'keep missing' or 'keep forgetting'. 'Acclaim' is wrong word; replace with 'alarms' or 'reminders'. Suggestion: use 'keep' + present participle ('keep forgetting'/'keep missing') and correct noun 'alarms' or 'reminders'.