Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在较多的语气词和重复，影响流畅性。建议减少填充词，使用更自然简洁的表达，同时增加连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I wouldn't say I have a natural talent for memorising, but I can quickly remember important details, such as my friend's birthday or information saved on my phone.

제안: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，且内容表达不完整。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和语法，避免重复和语气词。

예시: Yes, I once forgot my mother's birthday, which was terrible. I apologized sincerely and bought her a bunch of flowers to make up for it.

제안: 回答中有较多语气词和重复，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，使用恰当的词汇，并用连接词使内容更连贯。

예시: I need to remember many things daily, such as school assignments, deadlines, email addresses, phone numbers, and other important contacts.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议使用完整句子，减少填充词，并用连接词使句子更自然。

예시: I usually write important things down by making a to-do list, which helps me focus and ensures I don't forget them.

× maybe some details, but I would say some important thing.

✓ maybe some details, but I would say some important things.

这里的 "thing" 应该用复数形式 "things"，因为前面用了 "some"，表示不止一件事物，名词应保持复数。

× like on the mobile phone and my friend's birthday.

✓ like my mobile phone and my friend's birthday.

"on the mobile phone" 这里不需要介词 "on"，且 "mobile phone" 前不需要冠词 "the"，因为指的是自己的手机。

× I forget my mother's birthday.

✓ I forgot my mother's birthday.

这里描述的是过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去式 "forgot"，而不是现在时 "forget"。

× It's so terrible and at this time I'm so sorry to her.

✓ It was so terrible and at that time I was so sorry to her.

描述过去的事件，动词时态应为过去时，"is" 改为 "was"，"I'm" 改为 "I was"。

× And then I just say sorry to her and buying her a bunch of flowers and to umm.

✓ And then I just said sorry to her and bought her a bunch of flowers.

描述过去的动作，动词 "say" 和 "buy" 应使用过去式 "said" 和 "bought"。

× like, uh, our school works and uh, the works deadline

✓ like, uh, our school work and uh, the work deadline

"work" 在这里是不可数名词，表示作业或工作，不用复数形式 "works"。

× sometimes the the others e-mail number or the phone number or some others address.

✓ sometimes the others' email number or the phone number or some other addresses.

"others" 作为所有格应加撇号，"email" 拼写错误，"address" 应用复数形式 "addresses"。

× So it's both important.

✓ So they're both important.

前面提到的是复数事物，谓语动词应使用复数形式 "are"，缩写为 "they're"。

× sometimes I just umm, to write it down.

✓ sometimes I just umm, write it down.

动词 "write" 前不需要不定式 "to"，直接用动词原形。

× to write A to do list.

✓ to write a to-do list.

"A to do list" 应写作 "a to-do list"，中间需要连字符，且冠词 "a" 应小写。

× It can always help me to never forget this kind of important thing.

✓ It can always help me to never forget these kinds of important things.

"this kind of" 指单数，后面应接单数名词；这里应使用复数形式 "these kinds of" 和 "things"，因为指多种重要的事情。