Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，表达不自然，且有语法错误。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I am not very good at memorising things because I often forget them. For example, I sometimes forget to submit my assignments on time, which shows that memorising is a useful skill I need to improve.

제안: 回答过于简短且不完整，缺乏具体细节和连贯性。建议直接回答问题并补充具体例子。

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I once missed a deadline because I didn't manage my time well while handling multiple tasks.

제안: 回答内容混乱，表达不清晰。建议明确列出需要记住的具体事项，并用连词连接句子。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember to contact my friends and parents regularly. Besides, I must keep track of deadlines for assignments and projects to avoid missing them.

제안: 回答不完整且表达不清楚。建议完整描述记忆方法，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I usually use my phone to set reminders for important tasks. Additionally, my roommates sometimes help me remember important guidelines, which is very helpful.

× OK, I believe I'm not that.

✓ OK, I believe I'm not good at that.

这里的 'I'm not that' 结构不完整，缺少形容词来描述 'that'，应补充形容词 'good at' 来表达完整意思。

× Memorize something, you know, I always forget that.

✓ When I memorize something, you know, I always forget it.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和连词，导致句意不清。应使用完整句子结构表达条件和结果。

× That they do submit my assignments and actually this ability always be useful, but I just cannot memorize.

✓ They do submit my assignments, and actually this ability is always useful, but I just cannot memorize.

原句中 'That they do submit' 用法不当，且 'this ability always be useful' 动词形式错误，应改为 'is always useful'。

× Multiple tasks I didn't manage my time.

✓ I didn't manage my time because of multiple tasks.

原句缺少连词和完整句子结构，导致表达不清晰。应补充原因状语从句使句子完整。

× OK. I think the most important thing is that you should memorize.

✓ OK. I think the most important thing is what you should memorize.

原句中 'is that you should memorize' 结构不完整，缺少宾语，导致句意不明。应补充宾语从句。

× The first time you post your friends and your parents besides, another important thing is you should be.

✓ First, you should remember your friends and your parents. Besides, another important thing is that you should be aware of deadlines.

原句结构混乱，缺少谓语和逻辑连接词，导致句意不清。应拆分句子并补充完整表达。

× But there's a deadline for different assignment and projects.

✓ But there are deadlines for different assignments and projects.

'assignment' 应为复数形式 'assignments'，且 'deadline' 应对应复数 'deadlines'，以匹配 'different' 修饰的多个项目。

× Well, I usually use my phone to write a reminder about this important thing.

✓ Well, I usually use my phone to write reminders about important things.

'reminder' 和 'important thing' 应使用复数形式，表示多条提醒和多件重要事项。

× Roommates to remind me about some important guidelines.

✓ My roommates remind me about some important guidelines.

原句缺少主语和谓语，导致句子不完整。应补充主语 'My roommates' 和谓语动词 'remind'。