Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に対して直接的に答え、テレビが好きな理由を具体的に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、テレビがどのように情報を提供してくれるかを明確に説明すると良いです。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the television because it provides me with interesting programs and useful information. I enjoy watching documentaries and news shows that help me learn about the world.

제안: 回答が非常に不明瞭で、質問に対する意見や理由が伝わっていません。質問に対して明確な意見を述べ、その理由や具体例を簡潔に説明する練習をしましょう。

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and vacuum cleaners are important because they save time and effort. For example, when I lived in England, I used a coin-operated washing machine which was very convenient for me.

제안: 回答は部分的に理解できますが、文法や表現が不自然です。状況によって説明する際は、より明確で自然な英語表現を使い、理由を具体的に述べる練習をしましょう。

예시: It depends on the situation. If I am unsure about how to use a machine, I read the instructions carefully. Otherwise, I usually don't read them.

제안: 回答が断片的で意味が伝わりにくいです。指示書を読む重要性について、自分の意見をはっきり述べ、理由や具体例を簡潔に説明する練習をしましょう。

예시: I think it is important to read the instructions because they explain how to use the machine safely and correctly. However, sometimes I skip them if I already know how to use the device.

× I fed my sink in my home.

✓ I have a sink in my home.

The original sentence uses 'fed' incorrectly; the intended meaning is to state possession, so 'have' is appropriate. 'Fed' is the past tense of 'feed' and does not fit here.

× Is television.

✓ It is a television.

The sentence lacks a subject and verb. Adding 'It is' completes the sentence structure.

× Dot come.

✓ It shows.

'Dot come' is unclear and incorrect. The intended meaning is that the television shows things, so 'It shows' is correct.

× Deck and show me the interesting things and the information.

✓ It shows me interesting things and information.

'Deck' is incorrect here; the sentence should state that the television shows things. Also, 'the interesting things and the information' is better as 'interesting things and information' for naturalness.

× I gripped my information from TV.

✓ I get my information from TV.

'Gripped' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'get' to express obtaining information.

× These machines are not always necessarily cause.

✓ These machines are not always necessary.

'Cause' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'necessary' to describe the importance of machines.

× When I was a England, I was in a Dome Italy.

✓ When I was in England, I was in a dome in Italy.

'a England' should be 'in England'; 'a Dome Italy' is unclear and should be 'a dome in Italy' for clarity.

× There's a coin loudly.

✓ There is a coin loudly.

The sentence is unclear; possibly intended to say 'There is a loud coin sound' or similar. 'Coin loudly' is not correct English.

× Calling loudly is very convenient be 'cause the very big.

✓ Calling loudly is very convenient because it is very big.

'be 'cause' should be 'because'; the sentence needs 'it is' to be grammatically correct.

× If I have, if I had a concern of something, I use. Instruction, but I read into instruction but it's not I don't use instructions.

✓ If I have a concern about something, I use instructions, but I don't always read them.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correcting verb tenses and sentence structure improves clarity.

× It's important, I think, but it it isn't necessarily.

✓ I think it's important, but it isn't always necessary.

The sentence has repetition and missing words; correcting these improves meaning and grammar.

× Uhm, the things struction is. Is the. At. Stop. That show shows. The important things in. DA Mass.

✓ The instructions show the important things in the machine.

The original is fragmented and unclear; reconstructing the sentence conveys the intended meaning clearly.