Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较简短，缺乏细节和连贯性。建议增加具体细节说明写日记的频率和原因，并使用连接词使回答更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I write quite often because I keep a diary every day to record my thoughts and experiences, which helps me reflect on my life.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构不完整。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复，并用连接词使内容连贯。

예시: I like writing because it boosts my mood. Whenever I feel depressed, I write down my feelings, which helps me feel better and relaxed.

제안: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议理清句子结构，使用正确时态和词汇，并提供具体例子说明写作内容的变化。

예시: Yes, the things I write change depending on my situation. For example, as a student, I write essays, but if I were a worker, I would write reports.

제안: 回答中有多处语法和表达错误，句子不连贯。建议使用简单清晰的句子表达偏好，并说明原因，注意语法和词汇的准确性。

예시: I prefer handwriting because it is my habit. Also, typing for a long time makes my eyes feel uncomfortable.

× Yes, I like because writing for me is a mood booster.

✓ Yes, I like it because writing for me is a mood booster.

句子中缺少宾语“it”，导致句子不完整。应在“like”后加上宾语“it”。

× Every times when I feel depressed, I will write something.

✓ Every time when I feel depressed, I will write something.

“Every times”是错误的复数形式，正确用法是“Every time”，表示每次。

× This procedure is a therapeutic for me.

✓ This procedure is therapeutic for me.

“therapeutic”是形容词，不需要冠词“a”。

× Yes, definitely a when you stay in different situation so writing also will be change like me.

✓ Yes, definitely when you stay in different situations, writing will also change like me.

句中“a”多余且错误，且“so”连接词用法不当，应改为逗号分隔。

× Yes, definitely a when you stay in different situation so writing also will be change like me.

✓ Yes, definitely when you stay in different situations, writing will also change like me.

“situation”应为复数“situations”，表示不同的情况。

× Yes, definitely a when you stay in different situation so writing also will be change like me.

✓ Yes, definitely when you stay in different situations, writing will also change like me.

“will be change”错误，应为“will change”，动词不需要被动形式。

× Now I'm a student so I need to write a lot of easy but if one I was a Walker I need to finish a lot of reports.

✓ Now I'm a student so I need to write a lot of essays but if I was a worker I need to finish a lot of reports.

“easy”应为“essays”（论文），且“Walker”应为“worker”（工人）。

× Now I'm a student so I need to write a lot of easy but if one I was a Walker I need to finish a lot of reports.

✓ Now I'm a student so I need to write a lot of essays but if I was a worker I need to finish a lot of reports.

“a Walker”中的“a”是正确的冠词，但“Walker”拼写错误，应为“worker”。

× I pay for handwriting be 'cause it is my habit, another it is at watching the screen for long time my ask could feel uncomfortable.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it is my habit; also, watching the screen for a long time can make my eyes feel uncomfortable.

“pay for”用法错误，应为“prefer”；“another”用法不当，应为“also”；“my ask”应为“my eyes”；句子结构混乱需调整。