Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason and an example. Use correct article/plural forms and linking words. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I love flowers because they are a universal symbol of love and appreciation. For example, I often give roses to my partner to make them feel special and to show my respect and care.

제안: Correct verb forms and article/plural use, and provide a clear supporting detail with a short example. Use linking words like "especially" and "for example" to organize the answer. Avoid unfinished sentences.

예시: Yes, my mother loves flowers, especially roses. She often decorates the house with floral arrangements during festivals; for example, she set up rose bouquets for our last holiday celebration.

제안: Use correct plural and article forms and combine ideas with linking words to avoid repetition. Give one specific detail about where the flowers are placed or what types they are. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, there are many flowers at my home because my mother loves gardening. For instance, she keeps potted jasmine and roses on the balcony and uses bouquets to decorate the living room.

제안: Provide a clear direct answer (yes/no/frequency), then add one specific reason and an example. Correct grammar (verb forms, articles) and avoid redundancy. Use linking words like "but" or "because" appropriately.

예시: Not every day, but I often take photos of flowers because I find them very beautiful. For example, I photographed a bright sunflower in the park last weekend, and it really brightened my day.

제안: Answer directly and then provide specific contexts and one example. Use correct collocations ("give/send flowers", "special day") and avoid repeating words. Keep it concise and natural.

예시: Yes, people often send flowers for special occasions such as birthdays, anniversaries and weddings. For example, friends commonly send bouquets to congratulate a couple on their wedding day.

× Yes, I really like flower because it is a symbol of love so we can give flower to our special person to make feel good and it shows the toward the person respect and care so I really.

✓ Yes, I really like flowers because they are symbols of love, so we can give flowers to our special person to make them feel good; it shows respect and care toward that person, so I really do.

The student used singular 'flower' where plural 'flowers' is correct when speaking generally. Also pronouns and verbs must agree with the plural noun: use 'they are' instead of 'it is.' Use 'them' and 'that person' for clarity. The sentence was also fragmented; combining clauses and adding 'do' clarifies the final emphasis. Suggestion: use plural nouns when talking about flowers in general and ensure pronoun-verb agreement and clearer clause connections.

× Yes, I know my mother really like flower, especially rose.

✓ Yes, I know my mother really likes flowers, especially roses.

With third person singular subject 'my mother', the verb needs an -s: 'likes'. Also use plural 'flowers' and 'roses' when speaking generally. Suggestion: add -s to verbs for he/she/it subjects and use plural nouns for general references.

× She really like to decorate with flower in occasion during festival she actually like and I recently give.

✓ She really likes to decorate with flowers on special occasions and during festivals; she actually likes them, and I recently gave some.

Errors: preposition 'in' should be 'on' for occasions; word order and conjunctions are incorrect. Also needed plural nouns and correct verb form 'likes'. Added 'some' to clarify object of 'gave.' Suggestion: use 'on special occasions' and 'during festivals', keep consistent plural forms, and split long fragments into clearer clauses.

× Yes, there are a lot of flower in my home because my mother really like flowers, so she always decorate home with flowers to make home even more beautiful and special, so I really like it.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of flowers in my home because my mother really likes flowers, so she always decorates the home with flowers to make it even more beautiful and special; I really like that.

Use plural 'flowers' after 'a lot of'. Subject-verb agreement: 'my mother... likes' and 'she decorates'. Add definite article 'the' and pronoun 'it' for clarity. Suggestion: ensure plural forms after quantifiers and match verbs to subjects.

× Not daily but I prefer to take photos of flowers because it is very beautiful so I can't deny to take a picture.

✓ Not daily, but I prefer to take photos of flowers because they are very beautiful, so I cannot resist taking a picture.

'Can't deny to take' is incorrect modal/verb pattern. Use 'cannot resist' followed by gerund 'taking'. Also match plural noun 'they are'. Suggestion: use correct collocations like 'cannot resist doing' and plural agreement.

× I really enjoy while taking picture of flower and it makes me makes my day even good.

✓ I really enjoy taking pictures of flowers, and it makes my day even better.

Remove unnecessary 'while' and use plural 'pictures' and 'flowers'. Use comparative 'better' rather than 'good'. Also remove duplicate 'makes'. Suggestion: use 'enjoy' + gerund, plural nouns for general statements, and correct adjective forms.

× Yes, in my country people usually give flowers to others during festival occasion like birthday, anniversary, wedding.

✓ Yes, in my country people usually give flowers to others on festive occasions like birthdays, anniversaries, and weddings.

Use 'on' with occasions and pluralize the occasion nouns. 'Festival occasion' is awkward; 'festive occasions' is natural. Suggestion: use 'on festive occasions' and plural forms when listing events.

× They usually take a flower to make them their special day even more special and feel good.

✓ They usually give flowers to make the recipient's special day even more special and to make them feel good.

Pronoun and verb usage was incorrect: 'take a flower to make them their special day' is unclear. Use 'give flowers' and clarify 'recipient's special day' and parallel infinitives 'to make... and to make'. Suggestion: ensure pronouns refer clearly and use parallel structure for multiple purposes.