Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant but has grammar and wording errors and some redundancy. Improve by giving one concise topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Use correct nouns and adjectives (e.g., "pleasant fragrance", "colourful varieties"). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I love flowers. I enjoy their pleasant fragrance and the vibrant colours they bring to a room. For example, seeing a vase of roses and lilies always brightens my mood.

제안: The response tries to answer but is confusing due to grammar mistakes and unclear pronouns. Start with a direct topic sentence stating who you know, then give one or two specific details (where they kept flowers, what types, a short anecdote) linked with words like "because" or "for example". Correct tense and pronoun usage matters.

예시: Yes, my grandmother loves flowers. When I was little she kept a large garden full of roses and marigolds, and every morning she would walk through it to water the plants.

제안: Good direct answer and a personal opinion, but watch subject–verb agreement and conditional phrasing. Make the contrast clearer with a linking word (e.g., "however"), and keep sentences concise. Use correct forms: "my mom does not" and "if I were given a chance".

예시: No, there aren't many flowers where I live because our house has no garden and my mother does not grow plants. However, if I were given the chance, I would love to fill my home with flowering plants.

제안: Meaning is understandable but sentences are ungrammatical and repetitive. Use a clear topic sentence and a time expression. Replace vague phrases with specific ones (e.g., "when I see them in parks or on the street") and correct tense: "when I see" not "when I saw". Avoid filler words like "yeah."

예시: Not regularly. I usually only take photos of flowers when I see attractive ones in parks or on the street, and I keep those pictures on my phone for inspiration.

제안: The answer addresses the question with an example but has grammar errors and some redundancy. Use appropriate articles and plural forms ("on Valentine's Day", "most people, especially men, like to buy flowers and give them to their loved ones"). You can add one supporting reason or contrast to enrich the answer.

예시: People usually send flowers for special occasions. For example, on Valentine's Day many people, especially men, buy flowers and give them to their partners as a romantic gesture.

× I like smelling the nice fragrant of the flower.

✓ I like smelling the nice fragrance of flowers.

The noun 'fragrant' is an adjective; the correct noun is 'fragrance'. Also 'flower' should be plural when speaking generally. Use the gerund 'smelling' correctly with the noun 'fragrance' to express enjoyment of the scent. Suggestion: Use 'fragrance' instead of 'fragrant' and pluralize 'flowers' when referring to flowers in general.

× I like the colorful variety of different kinds of flowers.

✓ I like the colorful variety of different kinds of flowers.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable. 'Colorful' correctly modifies 'variety', and 'different kinds of flowers' clarifies. No change needed. Suggestion: This sentence is fine as is.

× When I was a little my grandma used to have a wide garden and it's it folds of flowers like different kind of flowers every morning he likes.

✓ When I was little, my grandma used to have a large garden full of different kinds of flowers; she liked them very much.

Multiple issues: 'a little' is incorrect for age expression — use 'little' or 'young'. 'It's it folds of flowers' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is 'full of flowers' or 'a large number of flowers'. 'Different kind' should be plural 'different kinds'. Pronoun 'he' is incorrect for grandma; use 'she'. Verb tense and structure improved by using 'used to have' and 'she liked them'. Suggestion: Break long clauses, ensure pronouns agree in gender, pluralize 'kinds', and use 'full of' to indicate abundance.

× No, not at all. In the house where I live now, we don't have a garden and my mom do not plant any flowers nor plants.

✓ No, not at all. In the house where I live now, we don't have a garden and my mom does not plant any flowers or plants.

Subject-verb agreement error with 'my mom do not' — third person singular requires 'does not'. 'Nor' is awkward after a negative; 'or' is more natural in this context. Suggestion: Use 'doesn't' or 'does not' with third person singular and use 'or' to list alternatives.

× However, if I will be given a chance, I would love to have a house full of flowers.

✓ However, if I were given the chance, I would love to have a house full of flowers.

In conditional sentences expressing hypothetical situations, the correct form is the past subjunctive 'if I were given' rather than 'if I will be given'. Using 'would' in the main clause pairs with 'if' + past subjunctive. Suggestion: Use 'if I were given' or 'if I had the chance' with 'would' for hypothetical situations.

× I only take photos of flowers when I saw some flowers, but most of the time I don't think pictures of it, only when I will be given a chance to see a flowers on the road, on the park and yeah.

✓ I only take photos of flowers when I see them, but most of the time I don't take pictures. I only take photos when I have the chance to see flowers on the road or in the park.

Mixed and incorrect tenses: 'when I saw' should be present 'when I see' for habitual actions. 'I don't think pictures of it' is incorrect verb choice — should be 'don't take pictures of them'. 'When I will be given a chance' is incorrect for habitual or non-future conditional; use 'when I have the chance'. 'a flowers' incorrect article and pluralization. 'on the park' should be 'in the park'. Suggestion: Use present simple for habitual actions, correct verb 'take', match pronouns and plural forms, and use 'in the park'.

× I only take photos of flowers when I saw some flowers, but most of the time I don't think pictures of it, only when I will be given a chance to see a flowers on the road, on the park and yeah.

✓ I only take photos of flowers when I see them, but most of the time I don't take pictures. I only take photos when I have the chance to see flowers on the road or in the park.

'Will' is incorrectly used in 'when I will be given a chance' for habitual or general statements; use present simple 'have the chance' or conditional forms. Also 'don't think' is the wrong verb; should use 'don't take'. Suggestion: Use modal verbs and tenses consistent with the meaning: present simple for habitual actions and 'would' with past subjunctive for hypothetical ones.

× I think in my country people only send flowers during occasions.

✓ I think in my country people only send flowers on special occasions.

'During occasions' is unnatural; 'on special occasions' is the idiomatic expression. 'Only' placement is acceptable but 'special' clarifies the meaning. Suggestion: Use 'on special occasions' to indicate times when events happen.

× For example, during the Valentine's Day, most of the people, especially men likes to buy flower and give it their and give it to their loved ones.

✓ For example, on Valentine's Day, most people, especially men, like to buy flowers and give them to their loved ones.

Multiple issues: 'during the Valentine's Day' -> 'on Valentine's Day'. 'Most of the people' -> 'most people' is more natural. 'Men likes' should be 'men like' (third person plural). 'Buy flower' should be plural 'buy flowers'. 'Give it their and give it to their loved ones' is confused pronoun use; use 'give them to their loved ones'. Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement ('men like'), use plural nouns where appropriate ('flowers'), and use correct preposition 'on' for days.