Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you love flowers, then add one or two specific supporting details (why you like them and when you see them). Use correct grammar (singular/plural, verbs) and avoid filler words. Keep to a maximum of 3–4 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas (because, for example).

예시: Yes, I do love flowers because they look beautiful and smell pleasant. For example, I enjoy seeing flowering trees in spring and I often buy a small bouquet to brighten my room.

제안: Answer with a clear topic sentence and give specific details about the person and their habits. Correct grammar (use present simple, plural forms, and possessive structures) and use linking words (for instance, also). Avoid repetition. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, my uncle loves flowers a lot. For instance, he often buys bouquets and has many potted flowering plants on his balcony, which he waters and tends every weekend.

제안: Good structure: clear contrast and supporting detail. Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement, plurals) and combine short sentences with linking words (but, however, for example). Be concise and specific about types of flowers or times you visit to strengthen the answer.

예시: Not many flowers grow near my home, but there is a large garden by my school. For example, I often visit that garden at weekends because it is full of roses, lilies and cherry trees.

제안: Start with a clear statement and then give 2 specific details: which flowers you photograph and why. Fix grammar errors, use correct vocabulary (rose, colours) and avoid confusing sentences. Limit to 3–4 coherent sentences and use linking words (because, for example).

예시: Yes, I often photograph flowers because I enjoy their colours and shapes. For example, my favourite is the rose and I have many pictures of red, pink and purple roses in my gallery.

제안: Give a clear direct answer and provide specific examples of occasions. Reduce hesitations and filler words. Improve grammar (plural/singular, article use) and use linking words (for example, also). Keep it concise (2–3 sentences) and specific about customs.

예시: Yes, people often send flowers on special occasions. For example, it is common to give flowers on Valentine's Day, birthdays and anniversaries, and florists are especially busy on those days.

× Did you love flowers?

✓ Do you love flowers?

The examiner's question is in present tense asking about current preference. Using 'Did you love' implies past habit; the correct present tense form is 'Do you love'. Use simple present for general preferences.

× Everyone loves flower, especially smells so good.

✓ Everyone loves flowers; they especially smell so good.

The noun 'flower' should be plural after 'everyone loves' because it refers to flowers in general. Also 'smells so good' needs a subject ('they') to indicate what smells good. Use plural 'flowers' and add appropriate pronoun.

× Usually people use flour as a gift purpose.

✓ Usually people use flowers as gifts.

The student likely used 'flour' (a different word) and awkward phrase 'as a gift purpose.' The correct noun is 'flowers' and the natural expression is 'as gifts'. Keep plural to match general use.

× Someone also use it as a decoration.

✓ Someone also uses them as decorations.

With singular 'someone' the verb should be 'uses'. However, the intended meaning refers to people using flowers (plural), so 'them' (flowers) and plural 'decorations' are more natural. Ensure subject-verb agreement and consistent plurality.

× I don't know. Oh my.

✓ I'm not sure.

'I don't know. Oh my.' is fragmented and informal. A clearer response is 'I'm not sure.' which conveys uncertainty in one sentence appropriate to the test.

× My own uncle loves flower a lot.

✓ My uncle loves flowers a lot.

Use plural 'flowers' for general reference and omit unnecessary word 'own'. Use simple present 'loves' is correct for habitual action.

× He usually bought flower for his flower vest and he also has so many flower trees in his balcony he also love.

✓ He usually buys flowers for his flowerbed, and he also has many flowering trees on his balcony; he also loves them.

'Usually' requires simple present 'buys' not past 'bought'. Use plural 'flowers'. 'Flower vest' is likely 'flowerbed'. 'Has many flowering trees on his balcony' corrects preposition and noun form. Finally, 'he also love' should be 'he also loves' to match subject-verb agreement.

× No, there's not.

✓ No, there are not many.

The brief 'No, there's not.' is ungrammatical and unclear. The question asked 'Are there a lot of flowers where you live?' A clearer negative is 'No, there are not many.' which uses plural 'there are'.

× But in my school there are a lot of flower.

✓ But at my school there are a lot of flowers.

Use 'at my school' rather than 'in' and plural 'flowers' to match 'a lot of'.

× There's a garden near my school and that garden is very beautiful and charming.

✓ There is a garden near my school, and it is very beautiful and charming.

Grammatically acceptable but 'that garden' is awkward; using 'it' is more natural. Ensure comma before coordinating conjunction joining independent clauses.

× Sometimes I visit that garden, it's full of different flowers and trees.

✓ Sometimes I visit that garden; it's full of different flowers and trees.

Use a semicolon or a conjunction to join two independent clauses. Tenses are fine (present habitual). The correction improves punctuation and flow.

× Yes I do. I love to take photos especially flowers and I am A favorite flower is rose.

✓ Yes I do. I love to take photos of flowers, and my favorite flower is the rose.

Add 'of' after 'photos' to link object. 'I am A favorite flower is rose' is ungrammatical; replace with 'my favorite flower is the rose'. Include definite article 'the' when speaking about a class or species.

× So my whole gallery is full of the pictures of different rows such as red, rose, blue, purple.

✓ So my whole gallery is full of pictures of different roses such as red, pink, blue, and purple.

Use 'roses' not 'rows'. Remove 'the' before 'pictures' (not necessary). 'Rose' color 'rose' is incorrect; use 'pink'. List colors separated by commas and include 'and' before last item.

× It's starting to click a picture of a purple rose and it was pretty.

✓ I just took a picture of a purple rose, and it was pretty.

'It's starting to click a picture' is awkward and incorrect. Use 'I just took a picture' (past simple) to describe a completed action. Maintain consistent tense and subject clarity.

× Yeah, but in specials, occasional, uh, in like special days, uh, for example, in Valentine's Day, they give flowers to their favorite person.

✓ Yes, but on special occasions, for example on Valentine's Day, people give flowers to their loved ones.

Replace informal fillers. Use 'on special occasions' (quantifier and noun), 'on Valentine's Day' (preposition 'on' for days), and 'loved ones' or 'favorite person' improved to natural collocation.

× They also wish people with flowers in their special days, such as birthdays.

✓ They also congratulate people with flowers on special days, such as birthdays.

Use 'congratulate' or 'wish' with appropriate prepositions: 'congratulate someone on a day' or 'wish someone a happy birthday'. 'With flowers on special days' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× They also give flowers a gift and everyone loves it.

✓ They also give flowers as gifts, and everyone likes them.

'Give flowers a gift' is incorrect structure; use 'give flowers as gifts'. Use plural pronoun 'them' to refer to flowers, and 'likes' fits general preference better than 'loves' but 'love' is also acceptable.