Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct noun forms and word choices (e.g., 'tulips', 'several colors', 'lively'). Avoid repetition of 'really'.

예시: Yes, I love flowers. My favorite are tulips, especially yellow ones, because their bright color makes the room feel fresh and lively. I also enjoy mixed beds of tulips since the variety of colors looks cheerful and attractive.

제안: Give a complete, grammatically correct response with a clear topic sentence and a specific example. Use linking words (for example, because) and correct verb agreement ('she loves', 'she has'). Avoid trailing off; finish your thought.

예시: Yes, my best friend loves flowers. For example, on special occasions I usually buy her sunflowers because she says they make her feel cheerful; she likes their large, sunny appearance.

제안: Begin with a clear statement, then give specific supporting details about seasons and types. Use linking words (for example, in spring, during winter) and correct phrasing ('there are many types of flowers', 'different flowers appear in different seasons'). Be concise and avoid filler words.

예시: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. For example, in Melbourne you can see spring blooms like jacarandas and tulips, while winter brings different species such as camellias, so I enjoy seeing new flowers throughout the year.

제안: Use a clear topic sentence and correct tense and noun forms. Provide one or two specific habits and link them with words like 'for example' or 'also'. Avoid repeating words ('there are so many').

예시: Yes, I often take photos of flowers. For example, at the tulip exhibition I take many pictures because there are so many colorful blooms, and I also photograph flowers I see when walking along the street.

제안: Clarify and correct the reasons with accurate vocabulary and grammar. Start with a direct answer, then explain with specific reasons using linking words ('because', 'so'). Replace unclear words ('father') with correct ones ('flowers are quite expensive').

예시: No, people in Thailand do not send flowers very often. I think this is because flowers can be expensive and hard to find in some areas, so people usually give other gifts, such as meals or practical items.

× My favorite flower is Tulip.

✓ My favorite flower is the tulip.

Use of the definite article 'the' is required when referring to a specific common noun class 'tulip' as a type; also 'tulip' should be lowercase unless part of a proper name. Improve by using 'the' before the singular noun when speaking about the kind in general.

× I really love yellow Tulip but when they stay together like several color I still really like it.

✓ I really love yellow tulips, but when they are together in several colors I still really like them.

Multiple errors: pluralization of 'tulip' needed to match 'they' (use plural nouns for plural pronouns), adjective 'yellow' should be lowercase and plural form used for general preference. 'They stay together like several color' is ungrammatical; use 'they are together in several colors'. Pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to match plural. Improve by matching noun numbers and using correct adjective/adverb forms.

× For me it's like really fresh and life lively.

✓ For me it's really fresh and lively.

Phrase 'life lively' is ungrammatical; 'lively' is the correct adjective. 'Like' is unnecessary and weakens statement. Remove redundant words and use correct adjective order: adjective after 'really' describes the noun.

× Yes I do uh she's my best friend. She really love flowers so when she have a special days I always buy sunflower for her because sunflower is her favorite flower and she told me sunflower is like.

✓ Yes I do. She's my best friend. She really loves flowers, so when she has a special day I always buy a sunflower for her because the sunflower is her favorite flower, and she told me that sunflowers are like that.

Multiple subject-verb agreement errors: 'love' should be 'loves' and 'have' should be 'has' for third person singular. 'A special days' is inconsistent number: use 'a special day'. Use article 'a' before 'sunflower' and 'the' before 'sunflower' when referring to the type as a favorite. The trailing fragment was incomplete; add a plausible completion 'that sunflowers are like that' or ask for clarification. Improve by ensuring verbs agree with singular subject and matching articles and noun numbers.

× Yes, it is. I live in Melbourne so they have so many types of flower.

✓ Yes, there are. I live in Melbourne, so there are so many types of flowers.

Response 'Yes, it is.' is wrong for 'Are there a lot of flowers?' Use existential 'there are' to indicate existence. 'They have' is incorrect; use 'there are' or 'we have' and plural 'flowers'. Improve by using 'there are' for existence and plural nouns.

× Like they still have like when it's warm winter they have the flower as well, but when it's winter they have another type of flower.

✓ They still have flowers when the weather is warm in winter, and when it's cold winter they have other types of flowers.

Awkward structure and incorrect preposition usage: 'when it's warm winter' should be rephrased to 'when the weather is warm in winter' or 'during a warm winter'. 'Another type of flower' should be plural 'other types of flowers' to match general statement. Improve by clarifying time phrases and matching singular/plural nouns.

× So that made me really happy to live here because I can see the new.

✓ That makes me really happy to live here because I can see new flowers all the time.

Tense and structure issues: 'So that made me' shifts to past unnecessarily; use present 'That makes me' to match ongoing situation. 'I can see the new' is incomplete—add the noun 'flowers' and clarify frequency. Improve by keeping consistent tense and completing the object.

× When I go to the Tulip exhibition, I take a lot of flower there because it's so many tulips there.

✓ When I go to the tulip exhibition, I take a lot of photos of flowers there because there are so many tulips.

Original repeats 'there' and misuses 'take a lot of flower' (should be 'take a lot of photos of flowers' or 'take many photos' ). Also 'it's so many tulips there' should be 'there are so many tulips.' Improve by using correct verb-object collocation 'take photos of' and existential 'there are'.

× And if I walk along the street, if I saw some flower that I like, I always take.

✓ If I walk along the street and see some flowers that I like, I always take photos of them.

Mixed conditional/past tense error: 'if I walk' (present) should pair with 'see' (present), not 'saw' (past). 'Some flower' should be plural 'some flowers' and the object of 'take' must be explicit: 'take photos of them.' Improve by keeping conditional clauses in the same tense and completing the verb's object.

× No, they don't. I think it's because in Thailand the father quite expensive and not easy to find them so they will send another gift like the meal.

✓ No, they don't. I think it's because in Thailand flowers are quite expensive and not easy to find, so people send other gifts like meals.

Many pronoun and noun errors: 'the father' is incorrect — likely 'flowers'. Use plural 'flowers are' not 'the father'. 'Them' ambiguous; better to remove. 'They will send' unclear subject—use 'people send'. 'The meal' should be plural or generic 'meals' or 'a meal'. Improve by using correct nouns, matching plural forms, and clearer subjects.