Name— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接且语法正确，但内容较简单。可以补充一个具体原因或方法，让回答更自然、更完整，例如说明你会在初次见面时重复对方的名字。

예시: Yes, I think it’s fairly easy for me. I usually repeat someone’s name when we first meet, which helps me remember it.

제안: 回答中有明显的停顿和自我修正（“by wr by”），而且“keep try”语法不正确。建议使用完整、清晰的句子，并用“by writing down”或“by repeating”说明具体方法；注意表达一个主要方法即可。

예시: I usually remember people’s names by repeating them during our first conversation. If the name is unusual, I write it down afterwards.

제안: “I feel blue”可以表达难过，但后半句“can't remember it long time”意思不清，“a kindness people”也不符合语法。若想表达自己不会生气，可以说“我不会难过太久，因为我理解别人也会忘记名字”，并用“a kind person”或“understanding”表达。

예시: I feel a little disappointed when people forget my name, but I don’t stay upset for long. I understand that remembering names can be difficult, so I try to be kind about it.

제안: 开头直接回答了问题，但“I shouldn't forget”表达的是“不应该忘记”，没有清楚说明你是否经常忘记；“so I like them”也与前面的因果关系不清。建议说明自己通常记得名字，并解释名字对建立联系的重要性。

예시: No, I don’t often forget people’s names. I think remembering someone’s name shows that I care about them and helps us build a better relationship.

× In fact, I usually remember their names by wr by writing their name or keep try remember their names.

✓ In fact, I usually remember their names by writing their names or by trying to remember their names.

这里指的是多个人的名字，前后都用了复数 names，因此应将 their name 改为 their names。注意名词的单复数要与所指对象保持一致。

× In fact, I usually remember their names by wr by writing their name or keep try remember their names.

✓ In fact, I usually remember their names by writing their names or by trying to remember their names.

介词 by 后面接动词时，动词要用 -ing 形式；keep 后也通常接动词的 -ing 形式。可以说 by writing 和 by trying。

× I feel blue, but I can't remember it long time because I'm a kindness people.

✓ I feel blue, but I don't stay that way for long because I'm a kind person.

表示“持续不了很久”时，应在 long 前使用 for，构成 for long。建议记住表示一段持续时间时常用 for。

× I feel blue, but I can't remember it long time because I'm a kindness people.

✓ I feel blue, but I don't stay that way for long because I'm a kind person.

kindness 是名词，不能直接修饰 person；这里需要形容词 kind。形容词用于修饰名词，例如 a kind person。

× I feel blue, but I can't remember it long time because I'm a kindness people.

✓ I feel blue, but I don't stay that way for long because I'm a kind person.

冠词 a 后面应接单数可数名词，因此不能说 a ... people。这里应改为 a kind person。

× No, I don't. I shouldn't forget people's names, because I think it is important for me, so I like them.

✓ No, I don't. I shouldn't forget people's names because I think remembering them is important to me.

because 表示原因，so 表示结果，通常不在同一个句子中用 because...so 连接同一组因果关系。可以只保留 because，并将 remembering them 作为“重要”的具体内容。