Name— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答没有回应“记名字是否容易”，而是说了“做得好”，因此内容不切题。先直接回答容易或不容易，再补充一个具体原因或例子。注意使用 people's names，而不是 people's name。

예시: Not really. I often forget people's names, especially when I meet several people at once. I usually remember them better if I connect each name with the person's face or personality.

제안: 你提到了通过外貌或性格联想名字，这是相关的回答方向，但表达多次重复且例子不清楚。用一句话说明记忆方法，再给一个容易理解的具体例子；避免使用不自然的 wrapped by 和 collect the name with。注意 people's names 的复数形式。

예시: I try to connect a person's name with something noticeable about them. For example, if I meet someone called Tom who is a barber, I might remember him as “Tom the barber.” This kind of association helps the name stick in my mind.

제안: 你表达了过去会反思、现在会根据关系决定是否在意，这些内容切题，但时态和句子结构不清楚，重复较多。可以按“过去的感受—现在的看法”组织答案，并用 but 连接对比。最后应明确说明你会怎么做，不要停在 try to。

예시: I used to feel a little embarrassed when people forgot my name, and I would wonder if I had made a bad impression. These days, I don't take it personally, especially if I don't know the person well. I simply remind them of my name and move on.

제안: 你直接回答了问题，也给出了“同时需要记很多名字”这一原因，以及名字容易记时更容易回忆的补充，结构基本完整。需要删去重复和填充词，避免 but 和 so 连用；最后一句与前文意思矛盾，应表达名字复杂时更难记。注意 people 作复数，以及代词与 names 保持一致。

예시: Yes, I do, especially when I meet several people at the same time. Names that are unusual or easy to associate with someone are easier for me to remember. However, I often forget names that are complicated or unfamiliar.

× I always remember people's name wrapped by recognizing their appearance or personalities.

✓ I always remember people's names by associating them with their appearance or personalities.

people's 表示“人们的”，后面的 name 应使用复数 names。原句中的 wrapped by recognizing 结构也不符合这里的表达方式；用 by associating（通过联系）能正确表达记忆名字的方法。

× For example, if this person's name is uh, Tom and maybe I will collect the name with, uh, the Barber and the Barber.

✓ For example, if this person's name is Tom, I might associate the name with a barber.

if 引导条件从句后，主句应清楚表达结果。原句把 and maybe 放在从句与主句之间，使句子结构混乱。可用逗号分隔条件从句和主句，并用 might 表达可能性。

× The barbers often call, often call named Tom something like that.

✓ Barbers often call someone named Tom something like that.

原句在 call 后缺少清楚的宾语，而且 named Tom 的位置不正确。someone named Tom 表示“一个名叫 Tom 的人”，可以作为 call 的宾语。

× I just became in the past I would always reflect, reflect on myself.

✓ In the past, I would always reflect on myself.

原句把 I just became 和 I would always reflect 两个结构混在一起，导致句子不完整且意思不清。表达过去经常做某事时，可以用 In the past, I would...；删除多余且不完整的 I just became。

× Oh, what I what did around what, what I made mistakes about that.

✓ I would ask myself, “What did I do? What mistakes did I make?”

原句中的疑问句语序和从句结构混乱。直接提问时，使用疑问词 + 助动词 + 主语 + 动词的语序，例如 What did I do?；询问犯了什么错误时，可说 What mistakes did I make?

× But now I feel like that if the people are not important for me, I will ignore it or I will try to.

✓ But now I feel that if people are not important to me, I will ignore it or try to.

表示某人对自己是否重要时，应使用 important to me，而不是 important for me。

× But now I feel like that if the people are not important for me, I will ignore it or I will try to.

✓ But now I feel that if people are not important to me, I will ignore it or try to.

这里泛指不重要的人，不需要在 people 前加定冠词 the。feel that 后可直接接从句；feel like that 在这里不自然。

× Often I forget people's names, especially when I need to remember, uh, as many as of names at one time.

✓ I often forget people's names, especially when I need to remember as many names as possible at one time.

as many as 后不能再接 of。若想表达“尽可能多的名字”，可以说 as many names as possible。

× But if people's names are very funny and cute or easy to remember, so I can recall his or her names quickly.

✓ But if people's names are funny, cute, or easy to remember, I can recall them quickly.

if 从句后已经有主句，不应再用 so 连接结果。可直接说 If..., I can...。

× But if people's names are very funny and cute or easy to remember, so I can recall his or her names quickly.

✓ But if people's names are funny, cute, or easy to remember, I can recall them quickly.

people's names 是复数，后面应使用复数代词 them，不能用单数 his or her。

× Yes, I I think I'll forget it.

✓ Yes, I think I'll forget them.

这里谈论的是 people's names（复数），所以代词应使用 them，而不是 it。