Name— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly, then give a clear reason or contrast. Use natural phrasing such as “I find it easy to remember” and “I sometimes struggle to pronounce.” The final clause is unclear; explain whether difficult pronunciation makes the name harder to remember. Avoid fillers like “uh” and repeated “like.”

예시: It depends on the name. I usually find Chinese names easy to remember, but I sometimes struggle to pronounce Japanese or Indian names. If I’m unsure how to say a name, I may need to hear it a few times before I remember it.

제안: State your method directly and use the correct structure: “The best way is to match…” Avoid “you will quickly like remember it,” which is grammatically unnatural, and clarify the unclear phrase “puzzle limb off.” Add a specific detail about how you make the connection.

예시: I find it helpful to connect a person’s name with their face. For example, I repeat the name when we’re introduced and try to remember a distinctive feature about them. That makes the name easier to recall later.

제안: Give your main feeling clearly, then explain how you respond. The contrast “but if like remember my name” is confusing; say “when people do remember my name.” Use “I just repeat it” instead of “it just like repeat again,” and reduce fillers and repetition.

예시: I don’t mind if people forget my name, especially if we’ve only just met. I simply remind them, and it doesn’t bother me. If they remember it the next time, I feel pleased because it shows they were paying attention.

제안: Your answer has a clear contrast, but the pronouns shift between “him or her,” “their,” and “her.” Keep the pronouns consistent, and use “have a lot of conversations” or “talk often.” The response is cut off; finish the thought and keep it concise, ideally within three sentences.

예시: Yes, I sometimes forget a person’s name if I’ve only met them once. However, after we’ve met a few times and had some conversations, I’m much more likely to remember it. Using someone’s name when I speak to them also helps me remember it.

× If it's a Chinese name, I think uh easy to remember

✓ If it's a Chinese name, I think it's easy to remember.

The clause after 'I think' is missing the verb 'is'. Use 'it is' to form a complete clause: 'I think it's easy to remember.'

× I'll have the difficulty to pronounce it

✓ I'll have difficulty pronouncing it.

After 'have difficulty', use a gerund (the -ing form), not an infinitive. Say 'have difficulty pronouncing it.'

× and it will remember it

✓ and I will remember it

The name cannot remember something; the speaker is the person doing the remembering. Use 'I' as the subject pronoun.

× I think a best way

✓ I think the best way

Use 'the' with a superlative such as 'best' when referring to the top or most effective option.

× a best way is match their face with their name

✓ The best way is matching each person's face with their name.

After the linking verb 'is', use the gerund 'matching' here to describe the method. The revised wording also makes clear that each person's face is matched with that person's name.

× but if like remember my name I would feel happy

✓ But if people remembered my name, I would feel happy.

The original conditional clause is missing a clear subject and has no correctly formed verb. Use a complete if-clause, such as 'if people remembered my name,' followed by 'I would feel happy.'

× Um if not it just like repeat again.

✓ If not, I just repeat it.

The original clause does not clearly identify who repeats what, and 'like' is not needed in this structure. Include the subject 'I' and the object 'it' to make the sentence complete.

× If I only met him or her once, maybe I couldn't remember their names after I met them

✓ If I have only met someone once, I may not remember their name afterward.

The original switches between 'him or her,' 'their names,' and 'them,' making the reference unclear. Use 'someone' and consistently refer to that person's name.

× we have a lot of conversation now

✓ We have a lot of conversations now.

'Conversation' is a countable noun in this context. Use the plural form 'conversations' after 'a lot of' when referring to multiple conversations.

× We have to use their name to call her

✓ We have to use their names to address them.

The original switches from the plural reference 'their' to the singular pronoun 'her.' Keep the pronouns consistent with the people being discussed; 'them' works as a gender-neutral plural pronoun.