Name— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答问题，并用“remembering names is difficult”而不是“remember names is hard to do”来表达。你提到的原因不够清楚；如果想说自己会遇到来自不同国家的人，可以说“meet people from different countries”，并解释他们的名字对你来说不熟悉。注意动名词作主语，如“remembering”，以及“different languages and names”。

예시: Not really. I find it difficult to remember people's names, especially when I meet people from different countries. Their names may be unfamiliar to me, but I try to remember them by repeating them in my head.

제안: 你的联想记忆方法很具体，是回答中的优点。把“phone way”改成“a memory trick”或“an association”，并清楚说明你把朋友的名字 Desmond 和 diamond 联系起来。注意主谓一致（“these two words are”）、所有格（“his real name”），并避免重复使用“So”。

예시: I use little memory tricks to remember names. For example, I have a friend called Desmond, and I associate his name with the word “diamond” because they sound similar. When I think of a diamond, his name comes to mind.

제안: 回答中“can remember”与“feel very sad”意思矛盾；题目问的是别人“记不起”你的名字，应使用“can't remember”或“forget”。“I will very joyful”应改为“I feel happy”或“I don't mind”，而“not a big trouble”可换成更自然的“not a big deal”。用清晰的让步关系连接感受和反应。

예시: I feel a little hurt when someone forgets my name, especially if we have met several times. However, I don't take it too seriously, and I'm happy to introduce myself again. It isn't a big deal.

제안: 先直接回答“我不常忘记”，例如“I don't often forget people's names”。你后面重复强调名字很重要，建议删去重复内容，改为说明自己具体如何记名字。表达“把名字写在便条上”应使用“write their names down on a note”，而不是“wear them name”。注意名词复数和避免重复使用“So”。

예시: I don't often forget people's names because I know it can feel awkward when someone forgets yours. If I meet someone new, I sometimes write their name down in my phone. This helps me remember it later.

× Actually I think remember other people's names is hard to do

✓ Actually, I think remembering other people's names is hard to do.

类型名称：动词的 -ing 形式。这里“记住别人的名字”整体作主语，应使用动名词 remembering，而不是动词原形 remember。可记住：动词短语作主语时通常使用 -ing 形式。

× So they include different language and to their names.

✓ So they include different languages in their names.

类型名称：单复数问题。different 后面指多种语言时，language 应使用复数 languages。此处 also 应使用 in 表示语言出现在名字中；如果你想表达的是“他们说不同的语言”，可以说“They speak different languages”。

× So I think remember all the people's names is too difficult

✓ So I think remembering all the people's names is too difficult.

类型名称：动词的 -ing 形式。remembering all the people's names 是 think 后面从句中的主语，因此需要用动名词 remembering。建议检查动词短语是否在句中充当主语。

× I have a friend named the Dismond

✓ I have a friend named Desmond.

类型名称：定冠词使用错误。人名通常不在前面加 the，因此应说 named Desmond。这里根据后文出现的 Desmond 统一了名字拼写；专有名词的拼写本身不属于语法错误。

× So these two words is very close

✓ So these two words are very close.

类型名称：主谓一致错误。主语 these two words 是复数，be 动词应使用 are，而不是 is。建议先判断主语是单数还是复数，再选择对应的 be 动词。

× So if I mean I will remember oh diamond, then his really name Desmond has just come to my mind.

✓ So if I think of “diamond,” then his real name, Desmond, comes to mind.

类型名称：句子结构错误。原句中 if 从句的表达和后面的内容衔接不清；这里可用 think of 引出想到的词，并让 then 后面的主句表达“他的真名浮现在我脑海中”。建议使用清楚的条件从句和主句结构。

× his really name

✓ his real name

类型名称：形容词或副词使用错误。name 是名词，前面需要形容词 real 来修饰；really 是副词，不能在这里直接修饰名词。

× I will very joyful to introduce myself again to them

✓ I will be very joyful to introduce myself again to them.

类型名称：句子缺少动词。will 后面不能直接接形容词 joyful；需要加 be，构成 will be joyful。建议记住：情态动词 will 后接动词原形。

× I think that's not a big trouble.

✓ I think that's not much trouble.

类型名称：数量词使用错误。trouble 在这里通常作不可数名词，不用 a 修饰；可以用 much 表示“很多麻烦”。也可以改说“That’s not a big problem”。

× I don't worry often to forget people's name

✓ I don't often worry about forgetting people's names.

类型名称：介词使用错误。表示“担心某事”时，通常用 worry about；about 后接动词时要用 -ing 形式，因此是 about forgetting。

× I don't worry often to forget people's name

✓ I don't often worry about forgetting people's names.

类型名称：动词的 -ing 形式。介词 about 后面的动词应使用 -ing 形式，所以 to forget 应改为 forgetting。建议记住介词后接名词或动名词。

× I don't worry often to forget people's name

✓ I don't often worry about forgetting people's names.

类型名称：单复数问题。people's 指许多人的，后面泛指多个人的名字时应使用复数 names。

× So if you forget others people's names, they will feel very upset.

✓ So if you forget other people's names, they will feel very upset.

类型名称：代词使用错误。others 是独立代词，不能直接放在 people 前作修饰语；这里应使用 other，构成 other people's names。

× So I just wear them name and a note and remember them often.

✓ So I just write their names on a note and review them often.

类型名称：代词使用错误。them 是宾格，不能放在名词 names 前表示所属；应使用形容词性物主代词 their。表达“把他们的名字写在便条上”时，可说 write their names on a note。