Name— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly, then give one clear reason. Use the plural possessive "people's names" and avoid repeating similar ideas such as "making new friends" and "making connections." The final phrase, "one of like distress," is unclear; replace it with a natural expression such as "it's not difficult for me."

예시: Yes, I find it fairly easy to remember people's names. I'm interested in meeting new people, so I make an effort to listen carefully when they introduce themselves.

제안: Your answer is relevant, but the steps need clearer grammar and a little more detail. Use "first" and "then" rather than "seconds," and say "their faces" when speaking generally. You could explain how connecting a name with a face helps you remember it.

예시: First, I listen carefully when someone introduces themselves. Then I try to connect their name with their face, which makes it easier to remember later.

제안: State your feeling clearly and explain that your name is long. The phrase "in a young" is unclear, and "clearly or properly" is unnecessary here. Use "a long name" and a natural phrase such as "I feel a little hurt."

예시: I feel a little disappointed when people forget my name. It is quite long, so I understand why it can be difficult to remember, but I still appreciate it when people make an effort.

제안: Make the contrast between remembering someone's first name and forgetting their full name clearer. The opening phrase "No I don't think though" is ungrammatical; use "Not very often" or "No, not usually." Add punctuation and use "names" when referring to people in general.

예시: Not very often. If I keep in touch with someone, I usually remember their first name, although I might forget their full name.

× So remembering people's name is one of like distress.

✓ So remembering people's names is one of the things I find easy.

People's refers to multiple people, so names should be plural. The phrase one of must be followed by a plural noun phrase, such as one of the things. Use a complete phrase after one of.

× I'm always curious about making new friends with making connections with new people.

✓ I'm always curious about making new friends and connecting with new people.

The original repeats with in a way that does not clearly connect the two activities. Use and to join the parallel -ing forms making and connecting.

× First I pay attention when they are introducing themselves, seconds I remember their face and that's all.

✓ First, I pay attention when they are introducing themselves. Second, I remember their face, and that's all.

Seconds is a plural noun, but the sentence needs the sequence marker second. Use first and second consistently to introduce steps.

× To be honest, this isn't the first time that they cannot remember my name clearly or properly because I have very long name in a young and I quite feel a little bit sad.

✓ To be honest, this isn't the first time they have been unable to remember my name clearly or properly. I have a very long name, and I have had it since I was young, so I feel a little sad.

A singular countable noun such as name needs an article, so say a very long name. Remember to use an article before singular countable nouns.

× To be honest, this isn't the first time that they cannot remember my name clearly or properly because I have very long name in a young and I quite feel a little bit sad.

✓ To be honest, this isn't the first time they have been unable to remember my name clearly or properly. I have a very long name, and I have had it since I was young, so I feel a little sad.

In a young is not a correct phrase for describing how long the name has been long. Use since I was young to refer to a period that began in the past and continues to the present.

× To be honest, this isn't the first time that they cannot remember my name clearly or properly because I have very long name in a young and I quite feel a little bit sad.

✓ To be honest, this isn't the first time they have been unable to remember my name clearly or properly. I have a very long name, and I have had it since I was young, so I feel a little sad.

Quite is not placed naturally before feel in this sentence. Place the degree adverb before the adjective, as in I feel quite sad. A little sad is also a clear, natural alternative.

× No I don't think though if we still keep in touch I still remember their name but for a full name I cannot promise

✓ No, I don't think so. If we keep in touch, I remember their names, but I can't promise to remember their full names.

The original combines I don't think and if without a clear grammatical connection, making the sentence difficult to follow. Use I don't think so as a complete response, then begin a separate conditional clause with if. Include to remember after promise to make the intended meaning clear.