Name— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答“容易”或“不容易”，再用一个清楚的原因补充。避免重复 because 和 remember their names；注意主谓一致及搭配，例如说“their names suit their faces”或“their names seem to match their faces”。

예시: Yes, I usually find it quite easy to remember people's names. I try to connect each name with the person's face, and sometimes the name seems to suit them.

제안: 这一回答有多处重复和语法错误，而且句子没有说完。直接说明一个具体记忆方法，并用完整的例子解释；注意使用“a person’s name”和“their face”，避免连续重复 because。

예시: I usually repeat a person's name shortly after I meet them. I also connect the name with a feature of their face, which helps me remember it later.

제안: 你的态度表达得比较清楚，也给出了应对方式。把“don't care that if”改为“don't mind if”，并删除或改写含义不清的“responsive respect”；可以补充一句说明为什么你不介意。

예시: I don't mind if someone forgets my name. I just tell them again, because it's an easy mistake to make. It doesn't make me feel disrespected.

제안: 先用完整句回答“No, I don’t”，再说明你通常记得住名字的原因。注意使用“I’m good at it”和“I don’t often forget”，并删去没有说完的结尾，避免重复前面已经表达过的内容。

예시: No, I don't often forget people's names. I'm fairly good at remembering them, especially when I've had a proper conversation with someone.

× I think their names is very suit for their face.

✓ I think their names really suit their faces.

主语“their names”是复数，不能与单数形式“is”搭配。改为“suit”后，动词与复数主语一致；“their face”也应改为“their faces”，与“their names”所指的多人保持一致。

× I think their names is very suit for their face.

✓ I think their names really suit their faces.

“suit”在这里表示“适合”，应作为动词使用，不能写成“is very suit”。可以说“their names really suit their faces”，即“他们的名字确实很适合他们的脸”。

× To be honest, I really could I remember others names

✓ To be honest, I really can remember other people's names.

陈述句中应使用“主语 + 情态动词 + 动词”的语序，不能写成“I could I remember”。此处谈论现在的能力，用“can”比“could”更合适。

× I really could I remember others names

✓ I really can remember other people's names.

“others”不能直接放在“names”前表示“别人的名字”。应使用所有格“other people's”，或写成“others' names”。

× because if a girl named Anna

✓ For example, if a girl's name is Anna, I remember it.

原句以“because if”引出条件从句，但没有主句，因此句子不完整。可以用“For example”引出例子，并补上完整主句。

× I really don't care that if somebody can't remember my name, I will tell him again.

✓ I really don't care if somebody can't remember my name; I will tell them again.

“care”后面表示“是否”时直接用“if”，不需要再加“that”。此外，“somebody”指代不特定的人时，可以用单数“they/them”避免默认使用男性代词。

× I don't feel responsive respect for me.

✓ I don't feel that people disrespect me.

“responsive respect”不能表达“别人不尊重我”这一意思。这里可以用动词“disrespect”，并用“that”引导完整从句。

× I don't feel responsive respect for me.

✓ I don't feel that people disrespect me.

原句中“feel”后面的“responsive respect for me”结构不完整，无法构成清楚的从句。改为“feel that + 主语 + 动词”后，句子结构完整。

× I really good at it

✓ I'm really good at it.

“good”是形容词，作表语时需要系动词“be”。主语“I”对应“am”，缩写为“I'm”。

× I not often forget people's names

✓ I don't often forget people's names.

一般现在时的否定句需要在动词前加“do not”或“don't”。不能直接说“I not forget”。

× I think it's not deal with me

✓ I think it's not a big deal to me.

“deal”在这里是可数名词，单数形式前需要冠词；常用表达是“a big deal”。

× I think it's not deal with me

✓ I think it's not a big deal to me.

表示“对我来说不是什么大事”时，常用介词“to”，表达为“a big deal to me”，而不是“deal with me”。

× so I don't

✓ so I don't worry about it.

“don't”后面还需要接动词原形；原句在助动词后中断，没有表达完整意思。根据上下文，可以补为“don't worry about it”。