Name— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly, then give one clear reason and a specific example. Correct the plural form “faces” and use “names” rather than “snam.” The phrase “the World Event” is unclear, so describe the situation more naturally, such as meeting people at a large event.

예시: No, I don’t find it very easy to remember people’s names. I often meet several new people at events, and I get nervous during introductions, so I sometimes forget their names soon afterwards.

제안: Explain your strategy in a complete, natural sentence. Say that you repeat the person’s name aloud and connect it with their face; avoid the awkward phrases “repeat to speak out loud” and “their face to their names.”

예시: I usually repeat a person’s name aloud after they introduce themselves. I also try to connect the name with their face, which makes it easier to remember later.

제안: State your feeling clearly and then explain your reaction. The second half is difficult to understand; you could say that you understand people forget things and do not expect them to remember your name every time. Use “I don’t expect them to” rather than “I’m not forced them to must.”

예시: I feel a little embarrassed when someone forgets my name. However, I understand that people can forget things, so I don’t expect everyone to remember it every time.

제안: Your answer is direct and gives a relevant reason. Avoid repeating “often forget” and use the plural possessive “classmates’ names” because you are talking about more than one classmate. You could add a brief example for detail.

예시: Yes, I do, especially when it comes to my classmates’ names. Some of us don’t interact very often, so I sometimes forget their names, particularly if we’ve only met a few times.

× Well I don't find it very easy to remember people's names because there are often many new face and I get nervous for example, the World Event, I sometimes forget snam soon after introductions.

✓ Well, I don't find it very easy to remember people's names because there are often many new faces, and I get nervous. For example, at the World Event, I sometimes forget snam soon after introductions.

The quantifier many must be followed by a plural count noun, so face should be faces. The example also needs to be separated from the preceding clause to avoid a run-on sentence. The word snam appears to be a spelling error, which is not included in the specified grammar problem types, so it has not been changed.

× Well I don't find it very easy to remember people's names because there are often many new face and I get nervous for example, the World Event, I sometimes forget snam soon after introductions.

✓ Well, I don't find it very easy to remember people's names because there are often many new faces, and I get nervous. For example, at the World Event, I sometimes forget snam soon after introductions.

The original joins several complete thoughts without clear punctuation, making the sentence difficult to follow. Use a period before For example and introduce the event with at.

× Sometimes I just repeat to speak out loud and maybe I would force myself to remember their face to their names

✓ Sometimes I just repeat names out loud, and maybe I would force myself to remember their faces and names.

Repeat is not normally followed by to speak in this meaning. The natural construction is repeat names, or repeat speaking, depending on the intended meaning. Here, repeat names out loud is the clearest phrasing.

× Sometimes I just repeat to speak out loud and maybe I would force myself to remember their face to their names

✓ Sometimes I just repeat names out loud, and maybe I would force myself to remember their faces and names.

Their refers to multiple people, so face should be plural: faces. Use plural faces when referring to the faces of several people.

× Sometimes I just repeat to speak out loud and maybe I would force myself to remember their face to their names

✓ Sometimes I just repeat names out loud, and maybe I would force myself to associate their faces with their names.

To does not express the relationship between faces and names in this context. Use associate their faces with their names, or remember which name goes with each face.

× sometimes I feel really embarrassed but I think that is still the matter because people always forget something and I'm not forced them to must to remember my name.

✓ Sometimes I feel really embarrassed, but I think that is still the matter because people always forget something, and I don't force them to remember my name.

The passive form I'm not forced cannot take them as its direct object in this sentence. Use the active form I don't force them, with I as the subject and them as the object.

× sometimes I feel really embarrassed but I think that is still the matter because people always forget something and I'm not forced them to must to remember my name.

✓ Sometimes I feel really embarrassed, but I think that is still the matter because people always forget something, and I don't force them to remember my name.

Must is followed directly by the base form of a verb, without to. In this sentence, must is also unnecessary because force them to remember already expresses the intended idea.

× Yes, I do. I often forget my classmate's name because we don't really interact with each other very often so I usually forget their names.

✓ Yes, I do. I often forget my classmates' names because we don't really interact with each other very often, so I usually forget their names.

The sentence refers to more than one classmate, as shown by their names. Use the plural possessive classmates' and the plural noun names for consistent number.