Name— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接，也有具体例子，结构完整。注意名词单复数一致：泛指多个人时应说“people’s names”和“their faces”。可以把例子中的情境表达得更自然、简洁。

예시: No, I find it quite difficult to remember people's names. I can usually recognize their faces, but I sometimes mix up their names. For example, I once forgot the name of a new classmate when he greeted me, which was a little embarrassing.

제안: 回答包含了两种实用方法，内容切题。需要修正“people's name”的单复数，以及重复的“If if”；“conversion”应为“conversation”。使用“the person's name”或“people's names”会更自然。

예시: I usually repeat a person's name to myself a few times and try to associate it with their face. If possible, I also use their name during our conversation, which helps me remember it later.

제안: 你表达了理解他人的态度，也尝试解释原因，但有几处表达影响理解。“I think of getting names”可改为“I think forgetting names”；形容名字应使用“they are long or difficult to pronounce”；“I understand the light”可能想表达“I understand how they feel”。建议用简单、准确的句子。

예시: I don't get angry because I think forgetting names is quite normal. I sometimes forget other people's names too, especially if they are long or difficult to pronounce. So I understand how they feel, and I think it can happen to anyone.

제안: 回答直接，并用例子说明了自己容易忘记名字，整体逻辑清楚。注意“people's name”应为“people's names”。“Crewmates”通常指船员或机组人员；如果你指同学，可以使用“classmates”。

예시: Yes, I often forget people's names, even shortly after meeting them. For instance, when my classmates introduced themselves, I quickly forgot their names, although I could still recognize their faces.

× No, I find it quite difficult to remember people's name.

✓ No, I find it quite difficult to remember people's names.

这里的 people's 指多个人，因此泛指他们的名字时，name 应使用复数 names。检查名词前的所有格时，也要确认名词的单复数是否符合句意。

× I usually repeat the people's name to myself a few times and try to associate it with their face.

✓ I usually repeat people's names to myself a few times and try to associate them with their faces.

句子泛指许多人的名字，因此 name 应改为 names。后面的 it 指代 names，也要改为复数 them；对应的 face 也应改为 faces。

× I usually repeat the people's name to myself a few times and try to associate it with their face.

✓ I usually repeat people's names to myself a few times and try to associate them with their faces.

这里是在泛指人们的名字，并非指前文已经明确提到的一群特定人，所以通常不使用定冠词 the。泛指复数名词时，可直接说 people's names。

× If if possible, I also use their name during our conversion, which helps me remember it later.

✓ If possible, I also use their name during our conversion, which helps me remember it later.

条件连词 if 被重复使用了一次。表达“如果可能”的固定说法是 If possible，只保留一个 if 即可。

× I don't get angry because I think of getting names is quite normal.

✓ I don't get angry because I think forgetting names is quite normal.

think 后面接完整观点时，可以直接接从句或动名词短语；这里的 of 使后面的结构不完整，导致 getting names 和 is 之间的句子关系错误。结合上下文，想表达的是“忘记名字很正常”，可说 I think forgetting names is quite normal。

× I sometimes forget other people's name too, especially when there are long or difficult to pronounce.

✓ I sometimes forget other people's names too, especially when they are long or difficult to pronounce.

other people's 表示多个人，因此 name 应改为复数 names。另外，后半句描述这些名字的长度和发音难度，需用 they 指代 names 作主语。

× I sometimes forget other people's name too, especially when there are long or difficult to pronounce.

✓ I sometimes forget other people's names too, especially when they are long or difficult to pronounce.

when 后面的部分缺少合适的主语，there are 不能直接连接形容词 long 和 difficult to pronounce。可用 they 指代 names，构成完整的主谓结构：they are long or difficult to pronounce。

× Yes, I often forget people's name even shortly after meeting them.

✓ Yes, I often forget people's names even shortly after meeting them.

people's 指多个人，句中泛指他们的名字，所以 name 应使用复数 names。