Name— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接，观点和条件都很清楚，句子也自然。为了让答案更有内容，可以再补充一个具体原因或例子，例如说明多见几次后如何帮助你记住名字。注意“people's names”使用正确，表达简洁有效。

예시: Yes, it’s quite easy for me to remember people’s names, especially if I meet them a few times. Seeing someone repeatedly helps me connect their name with their face. For example, I can usually remember my classmates’ names after a few meetings.

제안: 回答有明确的方法，但第一句“I remember people's name”不自然，而且“name”应使用复数“names”。建议直接说明方法，并用连接词补充效果，避免重复表达。例如可以说先在对话中重复对方的名字，然后在心里再复习一次。

예시: I usually remember people’s names by repeating them during the conversation. For example, if someone introduces himself as David, I might say, “Nice to meet you, David.” This helps me focus on the name and remember it more easily.

제안: 回答直接，并且给出了感受和原因，结构完整。“uh”会影响流利度和自然度，建议删除。为了使语气更准确，可以把“maybe I wasn't important to them”改为“maybe I didn’t make much of an impression on them”，这样听起来不太绝对，也更符合语境。

예시: I feel a little disappointed when people can’t remember my name. However, I try not to take it personally because they may meet many new people every day. I usually remind them politely and continue the conversation.

제안: 回答清楚地给出了否定观点和原因，语法基本正确。为了增加具体性，可以补充一个实际场景或结果，例如说明在参加聚会或认识新同事时会使用这个方法。也可以把“repeat the name in my head”改为“repeat the name silently to myself”，表达更自然。

예시: No, I don’t often forget people’s names because I usually repeat them silently to myself. When I meet someone at a party, I try to use their name once or twice during the conversation. As a result, I can usually remember it afterwards.

× I remember people's name.

✓ I remember people's names.

“people”表示复数，谈论多个人的名字时，名词“name”也应使用复数形式“names”。因此应说“people's names”。

× By repeating the name during the conversation, it helps me focus on the name and not forget it.

✓ Repeating people's names during a conversation helps me focus on them and remember them.

原句开头的“By repeating...”是方式状语，但后面的主语“it”不能执行“repeating”这个动作，导致句子结构不自然。可以将动名词短语“Repeating people's names”直接作为主语，并用“them”指代“people's names”，使句子结构清晰、自然。