Name— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is direct, natural, and well supported with a clear reason. However, “it’s quite easy” and “it’s just become a sort of habit” express similar ideas, so the response could be slightly more concise. You could also add a specific context, such as meeting colleagues or clients, to make the answer more vivid.

예시: Yes, it’s quite easy for me to remember people’s names. I meet new people almost every day, so remembering names has gradually become a habit. I usually make a conscious effort to use someone’s name during our first conversation.

제안: You answer the question, but there are several grammar and fluency problems, including “a technique to remembering,” “I’m just so habitual to it,” and the repeated false starts. “Habitual” is not natural in this context; say “I’m used to it” instead. Avoid repeating “remembering people’s names or recalling people’s names,” and explain your method more clearly with a linking word and a specific example.

예시: I don’t use a specific technique. I’m simply used to meeting new people, so their names usually stay in my memory. Also, I try to repeat a person’s name during the conversation, which helps me remember it later.

제안: Your response is well developed and shows a balanced opinion: you explain your initial feeling and then acknowledge that people have different memories. However, “I would love it if somebody else also found it easy to remember my name” is awkward and repetitive. Use a more natural phrase such as “I’d appreciate it if people remembered my name,” and connect the ideas more smoothly.

예시: I feel slightly offended when someone forgets my name, especially if we have met several times. However, I try not to take it personally because some people are naturally bad at remembering names. I usually remind them politely and move on.

제안: This is a strong answer because it is direct, gives a clear memory strategy, and includes a specific example. To sound more natural, replace “a scenario that I experienced with them” with “an experience I shared with them.” The final sentence is somewhat repetitive, so combine the information more efficiently and use a linking expression such as “for instance.”

예시: Not very often. I usually connect a person’s name with a memorable experience or something they are interested in. For instance, my friend Abhijeet races cars, so I associate his name with motorsports, which makes it easy to remember.

× I don't have a specific technique to remembering people's names or recalling people's names.

✓ I don't have a specific technique for remembering or recalling people's names.

The noun technique is normally followed by the preposition for when it is followed by a gerund (-ing form). Therefore, use for remembering, not to remembering. The repeated phrase people's names can also be omitted for a more natural sentence.

× I I'm just so habitual to it.

✓ I'm just so used to it.

Habitual is not normally used to describe a person's familiarity with an activity in this structure. The adjective used is followed by to and means accustomed to something. Also, I is repeated accidentally; the correct form is I'm.

× I personally feel slightly offended by that, As for me it's quite easy to remember names and I would love it if somebody else also found it easy to remember my name.

✓ I personally feel slightly offended by that. As for me, it's quite easy to remember names, and I would love it if somebody else also found it easy to remember my name.

The original sentence joins two complete sentences with only a comma, creating a comma splice. Separate them with a full stop. A comma after the introductory phrase As for me also makes the sentence structure clearer.

× So, for example, I have this friend called Abhijeet, and how I remember him is by the fact that he drives cars, he races cars, so it makes it much easier.

✓ So, for example, I have a friend called Abhijeet, and I remember his name because he drives and races cars, which makes it much easier.

The pronoun it is unclear because the speaker is referring to Abhijeet's name, not to an already clearly identified object. Use his name to identify the meaning precisely. The relative pronoun which clearly refers to the fact that he drives and races cars.

× So, for example, I have this friend called Abhijeet, and how I remember him is by the fact that he drives cars, he races cars, so it makes it much easier.

✓ So, for example, I have a friend called Abhijeet. I remember his name because he drives and races cars, which makes it much easier.

The original sentence contains several clauses joined by commas, including the complete clauses he drives cars and he races cars. This creates a run-on sentence. Divide the ideas into two sentences and join the related verbs with and.