Name— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接，观点明确，也给出了记忆方法。不过，“connect their name with their feature”表达不自然，建议改为“associate a person's name with a distinctive feature”。另外，前两句意思重复，可以合并，并补充一个更具体的小例子，使答案更生动。

예시: Yes, definitely. I find it quite easy because I usually associate a person's name with a distinctive feature, such as their hairstyle or the way they dress. For example, I might remember someone as Lily with the bright red glasses.

제안: 回答有清晰的方法和例子，但“picture their name with”是不完整且不自然的表达，应改为“associate their name with their voice”或“visualize their name alongside that feature”。“As I said before”在连续回答中略显重复，可以直接回答。建议使用“also”或“another technique”连接第二个方法，并确保句子完整。

예시: I usually associate a person's name with a distinctive feature. For example, if someone often wears brightly coloured clothes, I link their name to that habit. I also repeat the person's name during our conversation, especially if they have a very deep voice, because repetition helps me remember it.

제안: 回答自然，态度和感受表达清楚，也使用了“but”进行转折。可以删去“very, very”这种重复表达，并将“it's a very common thing”改为更自然的“it happens quite often”。此外，可以补充一个具体情境，说明为什么会感到被忽视；同时注意“if someone always forgets”表示反复发生的情况，使用得当。

예시: It happens quite often, so I usually don’t take it too seriously. However, if the same person keeps forgetting my name, I may feel a little upset because it gives me the impression that they are not really paying attention to me. I would probably remind them politely rather than get angry.

제안: 回答有明确观点和原因，但“people's name”应改为复数所有格“people's names”，“diverse techniques”在这里略显生硬，可用“several techniques”或“different strategies”。最后一句“people can feel care and warmth”搭配不自然，建议改为“people feel valued and cared for”。可以加入一个具体策略，增强内容的细节性。

예시: No, I rarely forget people's names because I have a good memory and use several strategies to remember them. For instance, I repeat a new person's name during the conversation and try to associate it with a distinctive feature. I think this makes people feel valued and cared for.

× No, I rarely forget people's name because I have a good memory and I often use diverse techniques to help me remember.

✓ No, I rarely forget people's names because I have a good memory and I often use diverse techniques to help me remember.

“People's”表示“人们的”，修饰的是复数概念，因此后面的名词应使用复数形式“names”，而不是单数形式“name”。建议注意名词所有格后的名词是否需要与语境保持单复数一致。

× Besides, if another person has a very deep voice, I will picture their name with.

✓ Besides, if another person has a very deep voice, I will associate their name with that voice.

“picture their name with”中的介词搭配和动词用法不正确，而且句子结尾缺少明确的宾语。“associate A with B”表示“把A和B联系起来”，这里应说“associate their name with that voice”。建议记忆动词与介词的固定搭配，并确保介词后有完整的宾语。

× Besides, if another person has a very deep voice, I will picture their name with.

✓ Besides, if another person has a very deep voice, I will associate their name with that voice.

原句中的“picture their name with”结构不完整，句子没有清楚表达“把名字和声音联系起来”的意思。修改后使用完整的“associate A with B”结构，使句子成分完整、意思清晰。建议检查句子是否包含完整的谓语和宾语，以及动词结构是否完整。

× This way people can feel care and warmth.

✓ This way people can feel cared for and comforted.

“feel”后面需要使用形容词或过去分词来描述人的感受。“care”是名词，不能直接表示“被关心的”；“cared for”是过去分词短语，表示“受到关心的”。“comforted”表示“受到安慰的”。建议掌握“feel + 过去分词”表示某人受到某种对待或影响的结构，例如“feel respected”和“feel supported”。