Name— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly and avoid repetition. Use the natural phrase “remember people’s names,” not “remember a people’s name” or “memorize a people’s name.” Replace unclear expressions such as “mini people” and “so I can remember them all” with a specific explanation, and use a linking word such as “because” to connect your reason clearly. Keep the answer to two or three well-formed sentences.

예시: No, I’m not very good at remembering people’s names. I meet a lot of new people at school and in social situations, so I sometimes forget their names shortly after meeting them. I’m trying to improve by repeating their names during our first conversation.

제안: Use a clear method as your topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Correct the grammar in “people’s name” to “people’s names” and use parallel verb forms: “meeting,” “communicating,” and “sharing.” The phrases “try to down to it” and “speak up together” are unclear; replace them with “repeat their names” or “have regular conversations.” Avoid fillers such as “like” and “Yeah.”

예시: I usually remember people’s names by repeating them during our first conversation. I also try to have regular conversations with them and connect their names with something distinctive, such as their job or a hobby. This helps me remember them more easily.

제안: State your feeling directly and explain it logically. Use “I feel a bit nervous” or “I feel slightly disappointed,” not “I’m a bit feel nervous.” Avoid confusing and unnatural phrases such as “one of the crucial characters in my heart” and “I’m kidding.” Also, do not assume that forgetting your name means someone does not care; give a balanced explanation, such as meeting many people or having a poor memory.

예시: I feel a little disappointed when someone forgets my name, especially if we have already met several times. However, I understand that people may meet many others and simply have difficulty remembering names. I usually remind them politely and continue the conversation.

제안: Answer in the present simple because the question asks about a habit: use “I often forget,” not “I often forgot.” Explain that you forget names when you meet people only briefly, and avoid unclear phrases such as “made for a bit of time” and “in front of my first year.” Use a simple linking word such as “because” and provide a practical example or strategy.

예시: Yes, I often forget people’s names, especially when I meet them only briefly. If we do not have much time to talk, I may remember their face but forget their name. I usually try to remember it by repeating it or asking again politely.

× For me, it's not really easy to remember a people's name.

✓ For me, it's not really easy to remember people's names.

People's refers to names belonging to multiple people, so the noun name should be plural: names. Do not use a before the plural possessive phrase people's names.

× My memory is not really good to memorize.

✓ My memory is not very good at memorizing names.

After the adjective good, use the preposition at followed by a gerund (-ing form). The natural pattern is be good at doing something.

× I met like so many mini people we can say in a large number of people so I can remember them all.

✓ I have met so many people that I cannot remember them all.

The original sentence contains an incomplete and confusing structure. Use the pattern so + adjective or adverb + that + result clause. Also, people is already the plural form of person, so mini people is not grammatically appropriate here.

× So I guess maybe I should try my best to remember more.

✓ So, I guess I should try my best to remember more people's names.

The meaning is clearer and grammatically complete when the plural noun names is included after more. Use a plural noun when referring to names in general.

× I can remember people's name by meeting them every day.

✓ I can remember people's names by meeting them every day.

People's refers to more than one person's name in this general statement, so name must be pluralized to names.

× I can remember people's names by meeting them every day and try to communicate.

✓ I can remember people's names by meeting them every day and trying to communicate with them.

The preposition by should be followed by parallel gerund forms: meeting and trying. Use with them after communicate when describing communication with people.

× For me I'm a bit feel nervous.

✓ I feel a bit nervous.

The verb feel is already the main verb, so do not use the extra verb am before it. For a current feeling, use the present simple: I feel.

× So it's a little bit like a strange.

✓ So it feels a little strange.

Strange is an adjective, so it should not be used after the article a in this expression. The natural structure is feel or seem + adjective: It feels a little strange.

× If they didn't remember my name, which means that they did not even care about me.

✓ If they cannot remember my name, it means that they do not even care about me.

This describes a general or repeated situation, so use the present forms cannot and do not. The original past forms did not and didn't suggest a specific past event.

× I often forgot people's name.

✓ I often forget people's names.

The adverb often describes a repeated habit, so use the present simple forget rather than the past form forgot. People's names is plural because it refers to the names of multiple people.

× I often forget people's names because some of them like I just made for a bit of time or in short time.

✓ I often forget people's names because I have only known some of them for a short time.

The original phrase some of them like I just made is not a complete grammatical clause. Use the complete structure I have only known some of them, followed by for a short time to express duration.

× I can't remember their full name for some time.

✓ I can't remember their full names for some time.

The noun names should be plural because their refers to multiple people's names. For some time is acceptable for duration, although for a short time is more precise in this context.

× So which means that I remember their name by meeting their first in front of my first year.

✓ This means that I can remember their names by meeting them face-to-face.

The original sentence contains an unclear and incomplete structure, especially meeting their first and in front of my first year. Use meeting them face-to-face as a complete and grammatically natural phrase.