Name— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly in the first sentence: say that remembering names is difficult for you. Correct the grammar and word choice: use “people's names” rather than “people's name,” “I often misremember them” rather than “I always get misremember,” and “a strategy” rather than “some other strategy.” Avoid repetition of “remember people's names,” and add one specific reason or strategy to make the answer more effective.

예시: No, I find it quite difficult to remember people’s names, especially when I meet several new people at the same time. I often confuse their names, so I try to repeat each name during the conversation and use it again when I say goodbye.

제안: Explain one clear method instead of using unclear phrases. “Make some synonyms with their name” is not natural; say “associate their name with something” or “link their name to their face.” Correct the sentence structure and provide a specific example, such as connecting the person’s name with their appearance, job, or social-media profile. Use a linking word such as “because” or “so” logically.

예시: I usually associate a person’s name with something distinctive about them, such as their appearance or occupation. For example, if someone is called Lily and enjoys gardening, I connect her name with flowers. I also repeat the name quietly after meeting her so that I can remember it more easily.

제안: Your response gives a clear feeling and a balanced explanation, but improve the grammar and naturalness. Say “I understand that remembering people’s names isn’t easy” instead of “I also agree, remember people's name is not an easy job.” Use “I would be okay with it” or “I wouldn’t take it personally.” The answer is coherent, but adding a specific situation would make it more developed.

예시: I would probably feel a little disappointed if someone forgot my name, especially after we had spoken several times. However, I wouldn’t take it personally because I understand that remembering names can be difficult. I would simply remind them of my name and continue the conversation.

제안: The answer is incomplete and does not clearly state whether you often forget names. Begin with a direct answer, such as “Sometimes, especially when I have just met someone.” Correct the grammar: use “the depth of my relationship,” “if I have known someone for a long time,” and “I can remember their name easily.” Finish the sentence and add a contrast between close friends and new acquaintances.

예시: Yes, I sometimes forget people’s names, particularly when I have only just met them. However, if I have known someone for a long time or had a meaningful conversation with them, I can usually remember their name easily. I tend to forget names when I meet many new people at once.

× I think for me it's not an easy job to remember people's name because I always get. Misremember so often and I have to have some other strategy to remember people's name.

✓ I think, for me, it's not an easy job to remember people's names because I often misremember them, and I need another strategy to remember people's names.

The plural noun names is needed because the speaker is referring to the names of multiple people. Use names instead of name in both places.

× I think for me it's not an easy job to remember people's name because I always get. Misremember so often and I have to have some other strategy to remember people's name.

✓ I think, for me, it's not an easy job to remember people's names because I often misremember them, and I need another strategy to remember people's names.

Get. Misremember is not a grammatically complete or correctly structured expression. Use the verb misremember directly after the subject: I often misremember them. Also, the sentence should not be interrupted by a full stop after get.

× I would try to make some synonyms with their name because this is easy to link it their name will with their Facebook.

✓ I would try to associate their names with something because it is easy to link their names with their Facebook profiles.

The correct preposition after link is with, not the incomplete phrase link it their name. The structure link something with something is used to show a connection between two things.

× I would try to make some synonyms with their name because this is easy to link it their name will with their Facebook.

✓ I would try to associate their names with something because it is easy to link their names with their Facebook profiles.

The pronoun it does not correctly refer to the plural noun names. Use their names as the object of link. Also, Facebook profiles is the appropriate plural noun for the profiles belonging to different people.

× I would feel disappointed or frustrated if people can't remember my name. However, I also agree, remember people's name is not an easy job so I'm OK with it.

✓ I would feel disappointed or frustrated if people can't remember my name. However, I also agree that remembering people's names is not an easy job, so I'm OK with it.

The plural noun names is required because the sentence refers generally to the names of different people.

× I would feel disappointed or frustrated if people can't remember my name. However, I also agree, remember people's name is not an easy job so I'm OK with it.

✓ I would feel disappointed or frustrated if people can't remember my name. However, I also agree that remembering people's names is not an easy job, so I'm OK with it.

When a verb functions as the subject of a sentence, use the gerund form. Therefore, remembering, rather than remember, should be used as the subject of is not an easy job.

× It depends on how much deeper relationship or friendship I have with this person because if I meet this person for a long time and had a long conversation I would easily to.

✓ It depends on how deep a relationship or friendship I have with this person because if I have known this person for a long time and have had long conversations with them, I can easily remember their name.

How much cannot directly modify the singular countable noun relationship. Use how deep a relationship. The pattern is how + adjective + a/an + singular countable noun.

× It depends on how much deeper relationship or friendship I have with this person because if I meet this person for a long time and had a long conversation I would easily to.

✓ It depends on how deep a relationship or friendship I have with this person because if I have known this person for a long time and have had long conversations with them, I can easily remember their name.

The past-tense verb had does not fit the present situation described by It depends. Use the present perfect form have had to describe conversations that started in the past and are relevant now.

× It depends on how much deeper relationship or friendship I have with this person because if I meet this person for a long time and had a long conversation I would easily to.

✓ It depends on how deep a relationship or friendship I have with this person because if I have known this person for a long time and have had long conversations with them, I can easily remember their name.

The ending I would easily to is incomplete because easily needs to modify a complete verb phrase. Use can easily remember their name to complete the sentence grammatically and express the intended meaning.