Name— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly with a natural opening such as “No, not really.” Use the plural form “people’s names” and the phrase “when I meet several new people at once.” Avoid repeating the same noun and explain the situation more clearly by adding a specific result or example.

예시: No, not really. I often find it difficult to remember people’s names, especially when I meet several new people at once. I tend to feel nervous in those situations, so I sometimes forget their names and feel a little awkward when I have to speak to them again.

제안: Your answer is direct and includes two useful strategies. Improve the grammar by saying “write their names down” and keep the pronouns consistent: use “their names” rather than switching to “their name.” Add a brief example or result to make the answer more specific and effective.

예시: I usually write people’s names down shortly after I meet them. I also try to associate each name with something familiar, such as the person’s job or appearance. For example, if someone is wearing a red jacket, I may connect their name with that detail.

제안: Give your main feeling first and use a clearer contrast. Correct “I also not good” to “I’m also not good” and “in the case of working” to “in a work situation.” The answer would sound more natural if you explained that you understand the problem but find it more uncomfortable in professional contexts.

예시: I usually don’t think they’re being impolite because I also have trouble remembering people’s names. However, I feel a little embarrassed when it happens at work, because remembering colleagues’ names is important. In that situation, I politely reintroduce myself and continue the conversation.

제안: The answer is relevant, but it is incomplete and contains repeated errors. Use “people’s names,” “make an effort to memorize,” and finish the final idea clearly, for example, “so that I can recognize them more easily.” Add one specific method, such as repeating the name or connecting it with the person’s face, and avoid repeating “to.”

예시: Yes, I often forget people’s names because I’m not very good at memorizing them. To improve, I try to repeat a person’s name during the conversation and connect it with their face. This helps me remember both the name and the person more easily.

× Normally I find it difficult to remember people's name because I get nervous when I meet new people at once. I know that it'll become a little bit awkward if I cannot remember people's name.

✓ Normally, I find it difficult to remember people's names because I get nervous when I meet new people at once. I know that it'll become a little bit awkward if I cannot remember people's names.

The plural noun people requires the possessive plural form people's names when referring to the names of multiple people. Use names rather than name in both places.

× Well, I try to write it down after I hear their names or I also try to associate their name with something familiar.

✓ Well, I try to write them down after I hear their names, or I try to associate their names with something familiar.

Them is the correct object pronoun because it refers to the plural noun names. Their names should also be plural because the sentence refers to multiple people's names. The repeated use of also after or is unnecessary for the sentence structure.

× Well I don't think that person is impolite because I also not good at remembering people's name, but in the case of working I feel a little bit embarrassed and I try to reintroduce my name politely.

✓ Well, I don't think that person is impolite because I'm also not good at remembering people's names, but at work, I feel a little bit embarrassed and try to reintroduce myself politely.

The clause I also not good is missing the verb am, so it must be changed to I'm also not good. People's names must be plural because the speaker is referring to the names of multiple people. At work is the natural prepositional phrase for talking about the workplace. After try, reintroduce myself is more grammatically complete because the speaker is introducing the speaker's own identity again.

× Yes, I often forget people's name because I'm not good at memorizing things. So I try to make an effort to to memorize people's name and faces to ensure both are much

✓ Yes, I often forget people's names because I'm not good at memorizing things. So I try to make an effort to memorize people's names and faces to ensure that I remember both.

People's names must be plural because the sentence refers to the names of multiple people. The phrase to to memorize contains a duplicated to; use only one to after make an effort. The final clause was incomplete, so it needs a complete structure: to ensure that I remember both.