Name— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答“不是很容易”，再说明原因和具体例子。注意时态和搭配：people's names（复数），met someone last week，by the following week；“forget when I met him”表达不自然，可以改为“forget his name by the following week”。避免使用“I think”削弱语气，并将两个句子之间的逻辑表达得更清楚。

예시: No, it isn’t very easy for me to remember people’s names because my memory is not very good. For example, I can easily forget someone’s name by the following week, even if I had a pleasant conversation with them.

제안: 回答思路清楚，但存在明显的语法、词汇和表达问题。“When I first meet someone, I add...”应使用一般现在时；“his social media called We Chat”应改为“add them on WeChat”；“as a notion”不合适，应改为“as a note”或“in their contact details”。可以补充这样做的结果，使答案更完整；同时注意WeChat是中国版社交平台，不必详细解释。

예시: When I meet someone for the first time, I usually add them on WeChat and save their name in my contacts. I sometimes include a short note about where we met, which helps me remember them later.

제안: 观点明确，也有让步关系，但“understand”重复两次，句子过长，缺少连接和标点。应使用“other people's names”或“others' names”，并把“why he can't...”改为更自然的泛指表达，例如“why they might forget it”。可以用“However”连接自己的感受和理解，提升答案的逻辑性。

예시: I would feel slightly embarrassed at first, especially if we had met several times. However, I wouldn’t take it personally because I also struggle to remember other people’s names, so I understand that it can happen.

제안: 答案直接，并提供了记忆方法，但需要修正复数和介词搭配：people's names、their names；“thanks to the social media”应改为“thanks to social media”；“remember their name by the label”不自然，可改为“remember their names by checking the labels in my contacts”。建议补充一个具体说明，例如给联系人加备注，这样内容会更具体。

예시: Yes, I often forget people’s names, especially when I meet several new people at the same time. Fortunately, I use social media and add notes to my contacts, so I can check their names later.

× Now it's quite hard for me to remember people's name because my memory is not so good, I think.

✓ Now it's quite hard for me to remember people's names because my memory is not so good, I think.

“People”表示复数，所以其所有格后面的名词通常也要用复数形式。这里应使用“people's names”，表示“人们的名字”。

× For example when I meet someone last week I can easily forget when I met him the next week.

✓ For example, when I met someone last week, I could easily forget their name by the following week.

“Last week”明确表示过去时间，因此“meet”应改为过去式“met”。同时，描述过去的能力或可能性时，“can”应改为“could”。

× For example when I meet someone last week I can easily forget when I met him the next week.

✓ For example, when I meet someone, I can easily forget their name by the following week.

“Someone”表示不确定性别的人，不宜直接使用男性代词“him”。可以使用单数“they/their”来指代不确定性别的人。此外，应该说忘记“their name”，而不是忘记“when I met him”。

× When I first met someone, I will add his social media called We Chat something similar to Chinese version Facebook and I will add his name as a notion to help me remember his name

✓ When I first meet someone, I add them on WeChat, which is similar to the Chinese version of Facebook, and I add their name as a note to help me remember it.

这里描述的是通常的做法，不是某一次过去发生的事情，所以应使用一般现在时：“meet”和“add”，而不是过去时“met”或将来时“will add”。

× When I first met someone, I will add his social media called We Chat something similar to Chinese version Facebook and I will add his name as a notion to help me remember his name

✓ When I first meet someone, I add them on WeChat, which is similar to the Chinese version of Facebook, and I add their name as a note to help me remember it.

表示在社交媒体上添加某人时，通常使用介词“on”，所以应说“add them on WeChat”，而不是“add his social media”。

× When I first met someone, I will add his social media called We Chat something similar to Chinese version Facebook and I will add his name as a notion to help me remember his name

✓ When I first meet someone, I add them on WeChat, which is similar to the Chinese version of Facebook, and I add their name as a note to help me remember it.

“Chinese version of Facebook”是特指一个具体版本，因此前面需要使用定冠词“the”。正确表达是“the Chinese version of Facebook”。

× I would feel embarrassed at first but I can understand because I can easily remember others names as well so I can understand why he can't remember my name

✓ I would feel embarrassed at first, but I could understand because I can easily forget other people's names as well, so I could understand why they couldn't remember my name.

“People”是不确定性别的复数名词，因此不应使用男性代词“he”，应使用“they”。另外，“others names”缺少正确的所有格形式，表达“其他人的名字”应使用“other people's names”。

× I would feel embarrassed at first but I can understand because I can easily remember others names as well so I can understand why he can't remember my name

✓ I would feel embarrassed at first, but I could understand because I can easily forget other people's names as well. Therefore, I could understand why they couldn't remember my name.

原句同时使用“because”和“so”连接同一个因果关系，结构重复且不自然。可以使用“because”引出原因，再用新句子中的“Therefore”表示结果。

× Yes, I think I often forget people's name but thanks to the social media I can remember their name by the label

✓ Yes, I think I often forget people's names, but thanks to social media, I can remember their names by using labels.

“People”是复数，因此应说“people's names”。“Their”指代复数的“people”，后面的名词也应使用复数形式“names”。