Name— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接表达了观点，但第二句是句子残缺，且“when I met”应改为一般现在时“when I meet”。“have a behavior that remember”不自然，可以改为“make a habit of remembering”。另外，“at school or public places”与问题关系较弱，建议补充一个具体原因或例子。

예시: Yes, I find it fairly easy to remember people’s names. I make a habit of repeating a person’s name when I meet them for the first time, especially at school or in public places. This usually helps me remember their names later.

제안: 回答结构清晰，也使用了“Then”和“which”来连接细节。不过，“associate the names with their distinctive features and appearance”可以更自然地表达为“associate their names with distinctive features”，而“an eye with Glossus”表达不清，可能想说“眼睛颜色或其他明显特征”。建议提供一个准确、具体的例子。

예시: I usually repeat a person’s name several times during our conversation. Then, I associate it with a distinctive feature, such as their hairstyle, voice, or eye colour. For example, if someone has bright blue eyes, I connect that feature with their name, which makes it easier to remember.

제안: 回答清楚地表达了情绪，并给出了原因和结果，内容较完整。但“two word name”应改为“two-syllable name”或说明名字很简单；“there shouldn't be any difficulty remembering it”略显生硬，可以改为“it shouldn’t be difficult to remember”。此外，连续使用“So”和“And”连接句子不够自然，建议合并并加入更委婉的表达。

예시: I feel a little annoyed when people can’t remember my name, especially because it’s quite short and easy to pronounce. However, I understand that people meet many new people, so I don’t take it too seriously. It is still frustrating if I have to repeat it several times.

제안: 回答开头直接回应了问题，但答案在最后一句中断，影响完整性。“people's name”应改为“people’s names”；“physicists”是“物理学家”，这里应使用“physical features”或“appearance”；“distinctive characters”应改为“distinctive characteristics”。建议删除未完成的“And I think there are”，并用一个完整的总结句结束。

예시: No, I rarely forget people’s names. I have a fairly good memory, so I usually associate their names with their physical features or distinctive personalities. For example, I might remember someone as “the person with curly hair,” which helps me recall their name later.

× Personally, I find it quite easy to remember people's names, especially when I met them for the first time at school or public places.

✓ Personally, I find it quite easy to remember people's names, especially when I meet them for the first time at school or in public places.

这里描述的是通常的情况，所以应使用一般现在时 meet，而不是过去式 met。“public places”表示“公共场所”时，通常要用介词 in，因此应改为 in public places。

× Because I have a behavior that remember others' names.

✓ I have a habit of remembering other people's names.

原句以 Because 开头，但后面没有完整的主句，因此是句子结构不完整。“have a behavior”表达不自然，这里应使用 habit。表示“记住名字的习惯”时，habit 后面要接 of + 动词-ing形式，因此用 remembering。

× Then I will associate the names with their distinctive features and appearance such as an eye with Glossus, which helps me remember names better.

✓ Then I associate their names with their distinctive features and appearance, such as their eyes, which helps me remember their names better.

这个回答描述的是平时记忆名字的方法，不是将来要做的事情，所以应使用一般现在时 associate，而不是 will associate。原句中 such as 后面的例子结构不完整，改为 their eyes 后，例子与前面的 distinctive features 保持语法一致。

× It's a simple two word name.

✓ It's a simple two-word name.

当数词和名词一起作复合形容词、修饰另一个名词时，名词通常使用单数形式，并且需要用连字符连接。因此应写作 two-word name，而不是 two word name。

× And it can be bit frustrating when I have to repeat it several times.

✓ And it can be a bit frustrating when I have to repeat it several times.

bit 在这里表示“一点儿”，通常构成固定短语 a bit，因此 bit 前面必须加不定冠词 a。

× No, it's rare for me to forget people's name.

✓ No, it's rare for me to forget people's names.

people's 表示“人们的”，后面指的是许多人的名字，因此 name 应使用复数形式 names。

× I have a strong memory so I can usually immediately associate their names with their physicists or distinctive characters, which helps me remember better.

✓ I have a strong memory, so I can usually immediately associate their names with their physical features or distinctive characteristics, which helps me remember them better.

physicists 的意思是“物理学家”，这里需要表达“身体特征”，应使用 physical features。characters 在这里不适合表示人的特点，distinctive characteristics 更准确。另外，remember 后面需要宾语来明确“记住他们的名字”，因此补充 them。