Name— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly, then give one clear personal example. Improve grammatical accuracy by saying “when I first attended an orientation session at the hospital,” “there were many new people whose names I couldn’t remember,” and “I wrote them down in my phone to help them stick.” Avoid fillers such as “uh” and “umm,” and use the plural “names” consistently.

예시: No, I don’t find it very easy to remember people’s names. For example, when I first attended an orientation session at the hospital, there were many new colleagues whose names I couldn’t remember. Therefore, I wrote their names in my phone so that I could review them later.

제안: Give two methods in a clear sequence and avoid unclear phrases such as “write the name down in my film” and “do bad at you later.” Use “write the name down in my phone,” “look at it later,” and “repeat the name in conversation.” Correct the grammar in “both way” and “help they stick” by saying “both methods are useful” and “help the name stick.”

예시: I usually write the person’s name in my phone straight away and look at it again later. I also try to repeat the name naturally during the conversation, because this helps me remember it. I find that both methods are quite effective.

제안: State your feeling naturally with “I don’t mind” or “I’m not offended,” rather than “I will feel OK.” Explain the reason clearly and correct the sentence structure: “It’s normal not to remember someone’s name after meeting them for the first time.” Avoid repeating words and fillers, and use a specific but brief explanation to make the answer more complete.

예시: I don’t really mind when people can’t remember my name. It’s quite normal, especially after meeting someone for the first time, because they may be introduced to several people at once. I usually just remind them of my name and continue the conversation.

제안: This answer has a clear conditional structure and directly explains when you forget names. Improve naturalness by saying “If I haven’t spoken to someone or used their name for a long time, I may forget it” instead of “if I don’t mention a specific person’s name.” Add one short example or result, and reduce fillers and repetition.

예시: It depends. If I haven’t spoken to someone or used their name for a long time, I may forget it after a while. However, if I meet the person regularly and use their name in conversation, I can usually remember it. For example, I rarely forget the names of my close colleagues.

× For example, when I first stay on to the orientation in the hospital, there's a lot of new people's name I couldn't remember, so I, umm, write it down in my phone right away to help me stick it.

✓ For example, when I first attended orientation at the hospital, there's a lot of new people's name I couldn't remember, so I, umm, write it down in my phone right away to help me remember it.

The phrase stay on to the orientation is incorrect. Use attend orientation or go to the orientation. The preposition at is also more natural before the hospital when referring to the location.

× For example, when I first stay on to the orientation in the hospital, there's a lot of new people's name I couldn't remember, so I, umm, write it down in my phone right away to help me stick it.

✓ For example, when I first attended orientation at the hospital, there were a lot of new people's names I couldn't remember, so I, umm, wrote them down in my phone right away to help me remember them.

Because the sentence describes a past event, use there were instead of there's. The plural noun names also requires were.

× For example, when I first stay on to the orientation in the hospital, there's a lot of new people's name I couldn't remember, so I, umm, write it down in my phone right away to help me stick it.

✓ For example, when I first attended orientation at the hospital, there were a lot of new people's names I couldn't remember, so I, umm, wrote them down in my phone right away to help me remember them.

A lot of refers to more than one name, so name should be names. The pronouns and verb should also be plural: them and wrote them down.

× For example, when I first stay on to the orientation in the hospital, there's a lot of new people's name I couldn't remember, so I, umm, write it down in my phone right away to help me stick it.

✓ For example, when I first attended orientation at the hospital, there were a lot of new people's names I couldn't remember, so I, umm, wrote them down in my phone right away to help me remember them.

The sentence refers to a completed past experience, so use the past-tense verbs attended, were, and wrote instead of stay, there's, and write.

× As I mentioned, I usually write the name down in my film straight away to help me remember and I can do bad at you later, and I also repeat them naturally in conversation to help they stick.

✓ As I mentioned, I usually write the name down in my phone straight away to help me remember it and look at it later, and I also repeat it naturally in conversation to help it stick.

The pronouns must agree with the singular noun name. Use it, not them or they. They is a subject pronoun for plural people or things, while it is the correct pronoun for one name.

× As I mentioned, I usually write the name down in my film straight away to help me remember and I can do bad at you later, and I also repeat them naturally in conversation to help they stick.

✓ As I mentioned, I usually write the name down in my phone straight away to help me remember it and look at it later, and I also repeat it naturally in conversation to help it stick.

After help, the verb can be followed by the base form, as in help it stick. The original phrase help they stick is grammatically incorrect because they cannot function as the object of help in this sentence.

× Uh, both way. I think it's all useful.

✓ Uh, both ways. I think they're all useful.

Both refers to two items, so way must be plural: ways. The plural pronoun they is also needed to refer back to the two ways.

× I will feel OK.

✓ I feel OK.

The question asks about a usual or general reaction, so use the simple present. I will feel OK suggests a particular future situation.

× I, it's not, it's not matter for me because umm, it's a normal situation.

✓ It doesn't matter to me because it's a normal situation.

The original sentence contains an incomplete verb phrase: it's not matter. Use the complete structure it doesn't matter to me. The unnecessary repeated subject I should also be removed.

× You can remember a person's name, umm, in your first, first meeting, uh, is normal.

✓ It's normal not to remember a person's name at your first meeting.

The original sentence combines two structures incorrectly. Use It is normal followed by an infinitive phrase: It is normal not to remember. The preposition at is appropriate for a meeting.

× You can remember a person's name, umm, in your first, first meeting, uh, is normal.

✓ It's normal not to remember a person's name at your first meeting.

Use at before a specific event such as your first meeting. In your first meeting is less appropriate in this context.