Name— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接，但语言有些不自然且冗长。要更简洁并用更准确的表达说明区别原因。注意主谓一致和时态，避免口头语（like, you know）。可以开头用一句主题句，然后一两句具体解释并举例。

예시: It depends. I can usually remember names in my native Chinese, but I struggle with foreign names because their sounds and spelling are unfamiliar to me.

제안: 回答含混且逻辑不清，句子冗长并有语法错误。应先给出简洁的方法（主题句），然后用一两个具体例子说明（例如联想物品、重复发音或写下名字）。使用连接词使表达连贯。

예시: I usually focus on the pronunciation and associate it with the person's face. For example, if someone's name sounds like 'apple', I imagine them holding an apple, and I also repeat the name quietly to myself after meeting them.

제안: 回答表达了态度，但有逻辑和表达错误（词汇使用不当，如'birthday names or figures'）。应用更自然的词汇解释为何不介意，并给出简短例子或理由。保持句子简洁。

예시: I don't mind when people forget my name because I know remembering names can be difficult. For instance, I often forget names myself, so I understand it's not personal.

제안: 回答意思明确但语法和词汇错误较多，且句子冗长。应直接回答并提供清晰原因（例如汉字种类多、读音相似），用连贯的连接词，并避免不必要的填充词。

예시: Yes, I often forget names, especially Chinese ones, because there are many possible character combinations and many names sound very similar, which makes them hard to distinguish.

× I can remember other people's name in Chinese, which is my native language.

✓ I can remember other people's names in Chinese, which is my native language.

名词单复数错误：原句中的 name 应为复数 names，因为指代“其他人的名字”是复数。建议：当谈到不止一个人或泛指多个人时，使用复数形式。

× then I feel really struggled to remember other people's names and it's really like awkward, you know?

✓ then I really struggle to remember other people's names and it feels really awkward, you know?

第三人称或动词形式错误：原句中用法混乱（feel really struggled）不符合主语与动词的搭配。应使用主动形式 'I really struggle'（我很难记住）并将 'it feels really awkward' 用来表达感觉。建议：主语为 I 时搭配一般现在时的动词形式；用 'feel + 形容词' 表达感受。

× in most of the time, I think people's names always resembled like with some certain things like both of water or some apples or and in the most of the time I just remember the pronunciation of the names and then associated it with the face.

✓ most of the time, I think people's names always resemble certain things, like water or apples, and most of the time I just remember the pronunciation of the names and then associate it with the face.

介词和介词短语使用不当以及动词形式错误：原句中 'in most of the time' 常用为 'most of the time'；'resembled like with' 是错误搭配，应为 'resemble'（与……相似）或 'remind me of'，且动词时态与主语不一致（'associated' 应为 'associate' 与 'I' 一致）。建议：固定短语使用 'most of the time'，避免重复介词；使用正确动词搭配并保持主语-动词一致。

× Actually, I don't really think about that, but you know, in most of the time, I think people's names always resembled like with some certain things like both of water or some apples or and in the most of the time I just remember the pronunciation of the names and then associated it with the face.

✓ Actually, I don't really think about that, but you know, most of the time I think people's names always resemble certain things like water or apples, and most of the time I just remember the pronunciation of the names and then associate it with the face.

现在分词/动词形式问题：句中 'resembled' 和 'associated' 使用了过去式或过去分词形式，但句子描述的是一般事实，应使用一般现在时 'resemble' 和 'associate'。建议：描述习惯或常态时使用一般现在时。

× I totally remember. People just forget.

✓ I totally understand. People just forget.

代词/用词不当：原句 'I totally remember' 与上下文意思不符，学生想表达“我完全理解（为什么他们忘记）”，应为 'I totally understand'。建议：注意代词/动词选择是否符合语境意义。

× I think it's really hard to me especially in Chinese because there are too many combination of word can use as a name and also the amount of characters can peak from to users in name, so it's really rational to forget.

✓ I think it's really hard for me, especially with Chinese, because there are too many combinations of words that can be used as names and the number of characters that can appear in a name is large, so it's reasonable to forget.

现在时及结构问题：原句中 'hard to me' 应为 'hard for me'；'combination' 应用复数 'combinations'；动词和从句结构错误（'can use as a name' 应为 'that can be used as names'；'amount of characters can peak from to users in name' 无意义，应表达 'the number of characters that can appear in a name'）。此外 'rational' 用法不当，应为 'reasonable'。建议：注意固定搭配（hard for sb），名词单复数及定语从句结构，使用合适的形容词。